Whither Vanished My Dream

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In the wee hours of a silent night In my sleep I dreamt a dream A lovely delightful dream That took me to the land of love In my dream I saw my prince His contours aflame with sparks of fire His eyes dewy with love His lips quivering for a passionate kiss But the cruel dawn came down Sounding bugles across the hazy sky Spreading thick veils of separation And tore his face from mine Come, Oh Night! Come once again Driven in the chariot of darkness And bring him to the shelter of my arms To wrap him in the warmth of my caresses To enfold him in the tangles of my tresses When the whole world in deep sleep lies Let me once more be blessed With the dream of my heart’s delight And be lost in that magic spell Of his enchanting, electric presence Which in the height of my passion Was sullied by the light of dawn! August.7.2022 ~Placed Fifth~ As I Dream Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 8/15/2022 5:58:00 AM
Amazing, dreamy write Valsa. Your imagery is stunning. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 8/12/2022 5:19:00 PM
Valsa, truly beautiful writing and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 8/12/2022 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on this win. A creative write/picture. Dreams come in good/bad. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.............
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Date: 8/8/2022 1:35:00 AM
Don't wake me up. I need love and romance. But now I'll never find them, too old, too sick. Life must end. Hugs.
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Date: 8/7/2022 11:08:00 AM
Who wants to wake up from a dream of love? Enjoyed, Valsa!
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Date: 8/7/2022 8:26:00 AM
Valsa, this was a wonderful dream, and this evening was as appealing and captivating. Those who believe in the ability of their dreams to be magnificent facts of life will constrain civilization in the long term. Best chance of winning.
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Date: 8/7/2022 6:14:00 AM
What an enchanting dream and equally enchanting, alluring night! Beautifully conveyed, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 8/7/2022 5:12:00 AM
Valsa, this is a masterpiece--no exaggeration. The message of longing is vividly worded and so moving! Janice
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Date: 8/7/2022 4:48:00 AM
You just don't want to wake up from dreams like that but unfortunately the morning comes. Good luck Valsa hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
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