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White Night

I draw the curtains- in the sunshine the clematis beams a bonjour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/1/2009 7:08:00 AM
How incredibly beautiful. I hate missing your work. Thank you Brian for your thoughtful congrats. Hope to be back soon. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/1/2009 6:06:00 AM
Another beautiful write, brian. Been away from the soup for a while ... let me thank you now for giving a tribute to bob marley such honor in your contest. Soupmail me so I can get you the address (don't have access to soup myself). I know bob is dancing now for all who believe.
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Date: 5/1/2009 12:15:00 AM
"Cleamtis" beautiful! A perfect image of peace. Great write friend, so full of happiness. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:51:00 PM
Brian, I always enjoy your work. You can say so much in so few words. I admire that. Always, D S-J
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Date: 4/30/2009 10:36:00 AM
What a lovely poem...to my favs. BG
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Date: 4/30/2009 8:43:00 AM
What a great poem to wake up to. This is a good start to my morning. Thanks.
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:16:00 AM
This exudes a breath of elegance Brian! I always enjoy the trip down the page with your work!
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:10:00 AM
Oh...I do love this one very much!! Lovely work! ~ Best wishes...Carrie
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Date: 4/30/2009 4:25:00 AM
This is beauty captured in a few lines that sings a chorus of praise..well done my talented brother.
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:25:00 AM
Wow, perfect spring image here. love the vision of drawing the curtains to sun. thanks for the honor of placing in your contest, Brian. :) God bless, love, Kristin
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:19:00 AM
Smile~And did it smile and wave too? I love the simplicity and yet elegance of this and many of Your writes Brian!!!:):)~i can envision You standing there and beholding this plant, as Your last sight of it before Your curtains draw it towards a temporal goodbye~Smile~lingering thoughts ensue...."Good Job!!!"~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!":):) Hope Your Well, Bye ~
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:14:00 AM
Ours is waiting to burst into bloom , so I now know , what to look forward to , Brian ... Great descriptive Cingku ....
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