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Whispers That Fracture Halls

You feel the whispers slither down the long corridor, each murmur coiling around your thoughts like hungry vines. They scratch at your calm, sharp as claws unseen, and fracture your resolve until your heart cannot stay silent. You sense the walls themselves lean, curious and burdened, their cracks breathing echoes of every stolen word. Even the chairs groan beneath an invisible weight, worn by secrets that slide across the floor like restless ghosts. You watch as daylight winnows through frosty windows, afraid to face the truth those whispers carry. Driven by iron tongues that drip with accusation, you remain—a flicker of light defying their hush. You are planted in this room, roots deep in purpose, a silent sentinel despite the whispers’ might. And though whispers may rise, their reign will fall to dust— when your truth, at last, breaks free and echoes with light.

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Date: 7/18/2025 4:32:00 PM
powerful poem, Rowena! So much of this poem resonates with me. My favorite line is 'Driven by iron tongues that drip with accusation, you remain—a flicker of light defying their hush.' It speaks to the power of personal conviction in the midst of character assassination. Have to FAV! hugs, Sara
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! Your words mean a lot. That line came from a place of deep truth—I'm glad it spoke to you. Hugs back!
Date: 7/18/2025 2:28:00 PM
A spectacular Personification, Rowena. Another FAV for my collection, my friend. You dive deeply into conflict of whispers and the truth and rightly allow the truth to prevail. I love the lines, "Driven by iron tongues that drip with accusation, you remain—a flicker of light defying their hush." Powerful poetry! Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bill! Your kind words and support truly lift my spirit. I’m honored that the poem spoke to you—that line carries a lot of weight for me. Grateful to be part of your collection, my friend. Blessings from afar!
Date: 7/18/2025 11:21:00 AM
Dear Rowena, what a powerfully written poem. The way you use words is quite amazing weaving them into eloquent images that put me right into the scene you set. Thank you for sharing your insights. Blessings to you.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words—they truly mean a lot to me. I'm deeply grateful the imagery resonated with you. Blessings and light to you as well!
Date: 7/18/2025 8:09:00 AM
Dear Rowena, first, I'd like to commend you on your amazing title. So creative and potent it inspired my attention and curiosity immediately. Your verses are spine-tingling. The artistry of your imagery is compelling, deep and rich, creative in power that stirs both imagination and the visceral depths of being. I was especially struck by this metaphor "iron tongues that drip with accusation" -wow! Outstanding! An exceptional, expressive poem, from title to rousing finale. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 6:45:00 PM
Dear Susan, thank you so much for your beautiful and heartfelt message. I’m deeply touched by your reflections and honored that the poem and its title resonated with you. Your support and thoughtful reading truly mean a lot. Warmest wishes and gratitude always!
Date: 7/18/2025 8:05:00 AM
Intriguing write with a powerful ending. Truth will always prevail. Accusations are for a time.. truth is for always. Lovely imagery... loved the bit about the walls leaning in. Well done.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much! I’m glad the ending and imagery resonated with you. Yes—truth stands firm, even when shadows gather. Your words are deeply appreciated.
Date: 7/18/2025 7:30:00 AM
Fantastic poem that revolves around the struggle between external pressures (represented by whispers and accusations) and the inner strength of the individual. Thanks for your comment on my page
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your thoughtful reading of the poem—it’s that inner strength that keeps us grounded. And you're most welcome, I enjoyed visiting your page!
Date: 7/18/2025 6:00:00 AM
This is fascinating to me, as it echoes the sentiments that serve as the primary theme for a Kdrama we just finished watching titled Melancholia. Have you seen it? In any case, powerful poetry Roweena. You're one of my new faves
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/18/2025 12:22:00 PM
PS. Nice to see your work getting more attention:)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 7:20:00 AM
I’m glad the poem resonated with the liminal depths of Melancholia! I haven’t seen it personally, I'll watch it then Thank you so much—that warm feedback truly means a lot. It’s a privilege to connect through words. And your insights on Melancholia deepen how I experience that kind of silence breaking into storms—and how strength can quietly rebuild from the shards.

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