Whispers That Fracture Halls

You feel the whispers slither down the long corridor,
each murmur coiling around your thoughts like hungry vines.
They scratch at your calm, sharp as claws unseen,
and fracture your resolve until your heart cannot stay silent.

You sense the walls themselves lean, curious and burdened,
their cracks breathing echoes of every stolen word.
Even the chairs groan beneath an invisible weight,
worn by secrets that slide across the floor like restless ghosts.

You watch as daylight winnows through frosty windows,
afraid to face the truth those whispers carry.
Driven by iron tongues that drip with accusation,
you remain—a flicker of light defying their hush.

You are planted in this room, roots deep in purpose,
a silent sentinel despite the whispers’ might.
And though whispers may rise, their reign will fall to dust—
when your truth, at last, breaks free and echoes with light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 11:03 AM
Wow, you received both a POTW and POTD! Great writing, Rowena!
Velasco Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 2:54 PM
Aww, thank you!
Fowler Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 5:50 AM
Double congrats Rowena! Nicely done! :)
Velasco Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Thanks Linda!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 3:03 AM
hooray, applause...congrats on POTW...I agree with Brandy...' whispers that drip with accusation, ' are worse than being told directly.
Velasco Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 4:22 AM
Thank you so much! I'm truly grateful for the support. Yes, I agree—those quiet accusations often leave the deepest marks. Appreciate your kind words!
Nicole Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:36 PM
I think ' whispers that drip with accusation, ' are worse than being told directly. It's hard to swallow when something is darted at you, but it hurts so deeply when you find out through whispers in the wind. Truth is better when done with kindness. Congratulations Rowena, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Velasco Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:50 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy. I truly feel your words—whispers can cut the deepest. Your kindness and insight mean a lot. Hugs back to you!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 2:23 PM
What a great choice for POTW. Big Congratulations. Well done!
Velasco Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Richard !
Andresen Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:30 PM
- Rowena, congratulations on your p.o.t.w. :) - hugs
Velasco Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs back to you!
Anaya Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Hello Rowena, your poetry is excellent, expressive, sensitive, imagery cinematic, I feel for the protagonist and want to comfort her I want vengeance! The best revenge is truth, great message. Congratulations on POTW poetess! I'm delighted for you Cheers!
Velasco Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:47 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya. Your words mean a lot. Grateful for your support!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. What a powerful write. Love the ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...................
Velasco Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and support. I'm truly grateful and touched. Wishing you a beautiful and blessed day as well!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:22 AM
returning to congratulate you, Rowena, on your POTW designation. This is a well-penned poem filled with insight, wisdom, and truth. Congrats!
Velasco Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Excellent imagery in your personification, Rowena. Thanks so much for visiting my poetry
Velasco Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your kind words and the chance to connect through poetry.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:32 PM
powerful poem, Rowena! So much of this poem resonates with me. My favorite line is 'Driven by iron tongues that drip with accusation, you remain—a flicker of light defying their hush.' It speaks to the power of personal conviction in the midst of character assassination. Have to FAV! hugs, Sara
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! Your words mean a lot. That line came from a place of deep truth—I'm glad it spoke to you. Hugs back!
Baker Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 2:28 PM
A spectacular Personification, Rowena. Another FAV for my collection, my friend. You dive deeply into conflict of whispers and the truth and rightly allow the truth to prevail. I love the lines, "Driven by iron tongues that drip with accusation, you remain—a flicker of light defying their hush." Powerful poetry! Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 6:35 PM
Thank you so much, Bill! Your kind words and support truly lift my spirit. I’m honored that the poem spoke to you—that line carries a lot of weight for me. Grateful to be part of your collection, my friend. Blessings from afar!
Kauffman Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Dear Rowena, what a powerfully written poem. The way you use words is quite amazing weaving them into eloquent images that put me right into the scene you set. Thank you for sharing your insights. Blessings to you.
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 6:36 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words—they truly mean a lot to me. I'm deeply grateful the imagery resonated with you. Blessings and light to you as well!
Ashley Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Dear Rowena, first, I'd like to commend you on your amazing title. So creative and potent it inspired my attention and curiosity immediately. Your verses are spine-tingling. The artistry of your imagery is compelling, deep and rich, creative in power that stirs both imagination and the visceral depths of being. I was especially struck by this metaphor "iron tongues that drip with accusation" -wow! Outstanding! An exceptional, expressive poem, from title to rousing finale. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Dear Susan, thank you so much for your beautiful and heartfelt message. I’m deeply touched by your reflections and honored that the poem and its title resonated with you. Your support and thoughtful reading truly mean a lot. Warmest wishes and gratitude always!
Manassian Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Intriguing write with a powerful ending. Truth will always prevail. Accusations are for a time.. truth is for always. Lovely imagery... loved the bit about the walls leaning in. Well done.
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much! I’m glad the ending and imagery resonated with you. Yes—truth stands firm, even when shadows gather. Your words are deeply appreciated.
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 7:30 AM
Fantastic poem that revolves around the struggle between external pressures (represented by whispers and accusations) and the inner strength of the individual. Thanks for your comment on my page
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 6:40 PM
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your thoughtful reading of the poem—it’s that inner strength that keeps us grounded. And you're most welcome, I enjoyed visiting your page!
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