Whispers Spilling From Their Lips

I wander down a cobbled street, 
sodden from rain, heckled by whispers
revealing secrets on this blustery night.
They bewilder me in a surge of confusion
far beyond the juncture of cursory fright.

If this is collusion to drive me insane,
I beg deliverence from their echoing disdain;
Are these callous voices reality or delusion,
taunting me to plunge into depths of despair?

There is no hope of suturing my wounds,
or to eviscerate my harrowed heart.
If I could expunge them from my mind
would that ease the grief caused by the thief 
who's bent on ripping my life apart?

Whispers are spilling from invisible lips. 
How they tantalize me with false accusation.
My emotions are bereaved by the goading quips.
It's a conceived conspiracy of fallacious blather,
repeatedly mocking me in condemnation.

They've branded me with hot tongues they wield,
burning scars in my ears. Chars that will not heal.
If only I could douse memory's flames. I'm curious
to know if doing so would eliminate this torment.

My body is beaten, slashed by blades of driving rain.
Like shards of glass each raindrop cuts
my skin until blood seeps from the crux of my soul
and life drips away in scarlet flux.

I am wracked with sobs, prostrate with weeping.
And still the hissing voices berate me.
My head is pounding from their petition of jeers.
but I've no confession to give, nor act of contrition.
"Not guilty," I scream, but they won't let me be.

A vortex eddies around my bare feet
and my breathing grows shallow as whispers fade.
Dawn's warm fingers reach out to comfort me,
breaching the darkness on a cobble stone street.


June 25, 2018
8 word challenge-1.Fallacious 2.Eviscerate 3. Curious 
4. Bewilder 5. Plunge 6. Tantalize 7. Vortex 8. Scarlet
John Hamilton~host

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/2/2018 3:59:00 PM
Powerfully penned and conceived , Lin. ...Shades of Dickensian and Mary Shelley's London. Congratulations on a richly deserved win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2018 4:35:00 PM
I'll humbly bow to the comparisons and thank you most sincerely, Gershon.
Date: 7/2/2018 1:44:00 PM
Such a well-written poem, Lin. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/2/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Sandra. It's really nice to hear from you.
Date: 7/2/2018 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on another amazing poem, as all of yours are. I have to admit I was surprised to see your name pop up in a contest. John
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Date: 7/2/2018 11:21:00 AM
and I must admit I was surprised to have entered another contest, but I admire John Hamilton and my pen was dripping with ink to write using those words. lol Thanks so very much for comments that I am always delighted to read, John.
Date: 7/1/2018 1:02:00 AM
Excellent, Lin, congrats on your being a topster! Viv x
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Date: 7/2/2018 11:08:00 AM
Thanks so very much. Nice to see you, Viv.
Date: 6/30/2018 5:40:00 PM
many congrats Lin I knew this would place high - the dreaded n/a for me but I'm getting used to it lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2018 6:01:00 PM
Ohhh, I'm so sorry. I read yours and thought it was a great drama, as was required.
Date: 6/30/2018 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this dark, wellwell-written poem making excellent use of the 8 words. Masterful!
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 6/29/2018 10:59:00 PM
Wow! Laney...I missed this one...but super congrats! are in order...your pen flows like a goddess scribing her will on divine paper...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thanks a whole lot, my winged friend. Your compliments are lovely. I've stopped writing for contests, but I couldn't resist this one for John D.
Date: 6/29/2018 6:40:00 PM
Amazing write Lin, thanks for entering, I do appreciate it. I had you higher in order but the system puts in multiple shared placements in random order. Anyway congrats on a shared first place!
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:38:00 PM
Hi, John. Thank you for choosing my write as a winner in your contest, and for letting me know you placed it higher in order. It's the only contest I've entered in months and that's because it was yours. Hope all is well with you and yours.
Date: 6/25/2018 10:04:00 PM
Really dark write.. you do it so well. Impressive, Lin!
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Date: 6/26/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, D.
Date: 6/25/2018 1:28:00 PM
Sadness, guilt, and rejection are callous thieves. Well done Lin...
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Date: 6/25/2018 4:15:00 PM
Hi ya, Charlie. Thanks a heap.
Date: 6/25/2018 1:26:00 PM
wow Lin you should enter this in the contest the imagery made my spine tingle, you do deep and dark so so well:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2018 4:14:00 PM
I'll give it more thought. I said I wouldn't, but considering the host....thanks for the tingly spine, Jan. ;-)
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