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Whispers of Your Soul

Sound of a soul echoing Eating inside the silence, ask what I should do for you Before I am taken away from you Inside a whirlpool rises Opening a gateway You are chariots of fire burning away shadows Drawn with blazing horses Truly one gift from God Absolute pure, like the driven snow Stands out before me,so very beautiful Sparkling starlight sprinkles Loving you, adorable vision Sweeping sweetly into paradise before these very eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/9/2014 3:53:00 AM
Beautiful...sound of the soul you have created here,Liam. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my writing. bfn Elaine
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Date: 9/8/2014 6:48:00 PM
this is marvelous! i love the 2nd stanza and the last two lines!
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:28:00 AM
- A warm poem from the heart and soul - Lovely poem, Liam - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2014 2:43:00 PM
A metaphysical experience beautified by your writing! Excellent, dear Liam!
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Date: 9/7/2014 11:53:00 AM
Liam, The title of this poem was not fully realized until I read the last two lines. Well done, inciting read.
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