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Whispers of Love

Whisper sweet words of love into my ear, embrace me close as the moon shines so bright. Listen to hearts beat, there's nothing to fear, lustrous stars are our guides through this night. Together our bodies twist, swirl and turn, horizons gaze on two lovers in flight. Passion kindles, be careful we may burn, promise to pour water, if we ignite. Your tongue serenades; seducing my mind, lustful charmer you play that secret tune. Merge deeper, hidden pleasures you shall find, take my breath away, as I lay in swoon. Vow these words will last until our last breath, always remain sacred until our death. Silent One Written 20 April 2016 Posted 8 February 2018
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Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:37 PM
As much as I adore this one, I was actually searching through my favourites for "The path of sorrow". So I searched through your catalogue as well and still no path to it! You simply must post it again if it's not lost forever! May Awen be with you!
One Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:38 PM
I will have a look for it.... Thanks
Barden Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Very nice Silent One - romantic and tinged with a bit of sensuality. Sonnet well-done ... keep up the great work.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Romantic spiritual love immortalised into the beauty of poetry! Wonderful write! Stay blessed.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 4:21 PM
So sensual and romantic, SO. Two soulmates share this supreme joy, and your pen tapped into the essence of that rarefied love. Masterfully done. Another poetic gemstone. Love and smiles.
Ajmal Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Really beautiful poem, to be honest I m lost for words, you have written it so beautifully,
S     Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:42 PM
How very fiery and romantic!!! A masterpiece sonnet in my eyes. ~ Judy
One Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Thanks Jude
Tracy Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 2:57 PM
The beautiful places you take your readers upon closing their eyes...Best wishes!
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Melissa..
Hamilton Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Yeah I remember this one still great!
Hamilton Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 10:31 AM
My memory is in my heart, words that touch me always remain!
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thank you John, what a great memory you have..
Y. Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Hi Silent, You have penned such a passionate and sensual Sonnett. I found it to be very romantic as well. It's such a good piece for Valentine's Day .Excellent job:-) Alexis
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Alexis... Only 6 more days to go..
Gentile Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 12:24 PM
A seductive sonnet indeed!. I think "your tongue serenades" is my favorite line!!!
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Mike..
Leiser Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Such a sensual, rapturous sonnet, Silent! Your words woo and beckon. Beautiful!
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Laura..
Canerdy Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 9:32 AM
So sexy and alluring--well-written, S.O.! Janice
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Janice..
Lindley Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 8:29 AM
A superb sonnet my friend. Sensual imagery and love expressed in human terms and tastes. A fav..
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Robert..
Michael Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Wow... real love vibes...I like it
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Arturo..
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:55 AM
A passionate sonnet, with great rhyming. Very nice :)
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Gondolf Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:05 AM
What a great sonnet, SO, filled with passion and desire. Really enjoyed this one. John
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thank you John..
Williams Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:54 AM
A very intoxicating elixir of romantic poetry Si. Sizzling Desires. Now excuse me while I go find my handsome Earthling Scott Eastwood...Maria
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Maria... Be careful of those earthlings..
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:36 AM
Another sizzling creation..a painting of ardent words!
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Scars Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:33 AM
great sonnet, another one of passion and romance, just what I like! thanks for sharing ;) -lullooo
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Lulloo..
Teagan Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:11 AM
I have the water ready, just in case lol This one is steamy. Very lovely, Silent One.
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Thank you, I think I preferred the other sonnet to this one..
Cunningham Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:16 AM
You certainly follow in the bard's foot steps. Regards Tom
One Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Thank you, i have the syllable count, but not the meter..
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