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Whisper sweet words of love into my ear, embrace me close as the moon shines so bright. Listen to hearts beat, there's nothing to fear, lustrous stars are our guides through this night. Together our bodies twist, swirl and turn, horizons gaze on two lovers in flight. Passion kindles, be careful we may burn, promise to pour water, if we ignite. Your tongue serenades; seducing my mind, lustful charmer you play that secret tune. Merge deeper, hidden pleasures you shall find, take my breath away, as I lay in swoon. Vow these words will last until our last breath, always remain sacred until our death. Silent One Written 20 April 2016 Posted 8 February 2018

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White Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 5:37:00 PM

As much as I adore this one, I was actually searching through my favourites for "The path of sorrow". So I searched through your catalogue as well and still no path to it! You simply must post it again if it's not lost forever! May Awen be with you!

Silent One
Date: 6/19/2018 5:38:00 PM

I will have a look for it.... Thanks

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/31/2018 7:30:00 PM

Very nice Silent One - romantic and tinged with a bit of sensuality. Sonnet well-done ... keep up the great work.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/22/2018 5:44:00 AM

Romantic spiritual love immortalised into the beauty of poetry! Wonderful write! Stay blessed.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/27/2018 4:21:00 PM

So sensual and romantic, SO. Two soulmates share this supreme joy, and your pen tapped into the essence of that rarefied love. Masterfully done. Another poetic gemstone. Love and smiles.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 2/10/2018 10:48:00 AM

Really beautiful poem, to be honest I m lost for words, you have written it so beautifully,

Judith S

Date: 2/8/2018 7:42:00 PM

How very fiery and romantic!!! A masterpiece sonnet in my eyes. ~ Judy

Silent One
Date: 2/9/2018 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Jude

Melissa Tracy

Date: 2/8/2018 2:57:00 PM

The beautiful places you take your readers upon closing their eyes...Best wishes!

Silent One
Date: 2/8/2018 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Melissa..

John Hamilton

Date: 2/8/2018 1:00:00 PM

Yeah I remember this one still great!

John Hamilton
Date: 2/9/2018 10:31:00 AM

My memory is in my heart, words that touch me always remain!

Silent One
Date: 2/8/2018 4:14:00 PM

Thank you John, what a great memory you have..

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/8/2018 12:32:00 PM

Hi Silent, You have penned such a passionate and sensual Sonnett. I found it to be very romantic as well. It's such a good piece for Valentine's Day .Excellent job:-) Alexis

Silent One
Date: 2/8/2018 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Alexis... Only 6 more days to go..