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Whispers In Shadows of My Dreams

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Unlock the answers with a tritina contest October 28, 2023

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2023 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2023 3:48:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Sara.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/15/2023 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story/picture with a great ending. Love It... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 10:08:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Paula.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/14/2023 11:03:00 AM

You have made this look so easy Lin, beautifully written. Congratulations on your placement

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 7:00:00 AM

It's a challenging form but worth the effort. Thank you very much for honoring my Tritina with a placement in your contest, Dilly.

Cynthia Vipond

Date: 11/2/2023 10:12:00 PM

This is sad, and sweet ;) Well done, Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 6:59:00 AM

Thank you very much, Cynthia.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/30/2023 8:33:00 PM

Beautifully done! It looks tricky to write...

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 6:58:00 AM

Hi Paige. It's not tricky but it does take a bit of focusing. Thank you very much.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/30/2023 1:40:00 AM

Excellent Tritina, Lin. Good entry for the contest. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 6:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot, my Texas friend.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/29/2023 12:03:00 PM

A lovely tritina Lin. Thanks

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 6:57:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jeff.

Jay Narain

Date: 10/29/2023 11:39:00 AM

Nice poem Lin. Emotional and well penned.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2023 6:57:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jay.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/28/2023 11:41:00 PM

A well-thought out poem. Very good work.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2023 1:52:00 AM

Thanks very much, Hilda.

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/28/2023 11:57:00 AM

An ethereal tritina of dreams, whispers, and shadows, yet paradoxically love and loss is definitely palpable throughout each stanza, wonderful writing Lin, and a great one for dilly’s contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 1:24:00 PM

It seems to be the pattern of many of my writes. Only for contest themes these days. Life is good. Thank you for cheering me on with your “Cheers” David.