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Whispering Sunset

The hyacinth stood on the dusking rise,
cerulean the waters did traverse,
the reeds consenting daylight to the skies
as pewter stones recited lapis verse.

The burning pyres of sunlight floated west
untouched by orchid mountains in the mist,
the periwinkle shadows did invest
in rising to the lingering deep kiss

by weeping echoes trailing on the sea
of fire and mangoes in most vibrant past,
the lemon grasses lilting on the lea
and scented mornings in their pungent cast.

The shorebirds ceased their gospels upon sight
as glowing whispers vanished in the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 4:21 PM
I am so happy to see this poem honored with POTD Dale. Congratulations! You already know how much I love it from my Fave! : )
Cozart Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 4:24 PM
Thanks so much, Connie! I hadn't even Looked!!
Smith Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 11:27 AM
No surprise, congratulations again Dale...
Cozart Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
La France Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Dale, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem and POTD!
Cozart Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Thanks, BW!
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Congrats Dale on well deserved top placement!
Cozart Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Ashley Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations Dale on your fine win with your beautiful write full of lovely lines of amazing imagery and rhyme. Enjoyed! :)
Cozart Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 9:27 PM
This is a gorgeous sonnet, Congrats Dale on a fine win, you're in great company on this one!
Cozart Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you very much, John.
Roper Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD Hugs Eve~`*
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Lovely, colorful depiction Dale, congratulations for POTD honors...
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Wanter Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:10 AM
I love this, Dale. You brought to words the sunsets over a nearby lake!
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:12 AM
Thanks so much, SW!
Eaton Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Hi Dale, many congratulations on achieving POTD, a brilliant and well written sonnet.
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Thanks so much, Steve!
Warrior Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Congrats!!! Dale on POTD!!!...yahoo!...great sonnet my friend...god bless...^WW^
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Thanks, WW!
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 7:18 AM
- A beautiful poem, Dale :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, AL! Nice surprise first thing in the morning.
Williams Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on POTD Dale. A wonderful sonnet....Maria
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Maria!
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September 30, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Gorgeous piece Dale, rich, congratulations on potd :) xomo!
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 5:43 AM
Congrats Dale---a very vibrant Sonnet--so pleasant to read!
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Adams Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:29 PM
You really have a way with words. Perfect rhyme you can't just read one time! Whispers vanished in the night. Great stuff!!..............Great write.....Pat
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Thanks, Pat!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:16 PM
This poem could satisfy the tastes of a most discerning poet Dale. Your sonnet is magnificent! The picture you have posted with it comes in as a close second! Your clever use of colors simply elevates your sonnet to outstanding heights! I love it and am faving it! : )
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 4:51 PM
Aw, Connie, I couldn't ask for more than that. Thank you so much.
Cresswell Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 10:45 AM
just a minute longer will I linger within this dream of colour. Hi I'm back that was a wonderment. Thank you.
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Thanks so much, Patricia!
Daniel Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Wow! Amazing, Dale:)
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Thanks so much, Jo!
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 2:31 AM
the imagery and image are absolutely stunning Dale I do love your use of colour in your poems:-0 adding to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thanks so much, Jan!!
White Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 1:42 AM
I love your sonnet, especially the first stanza.
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thank you, Darren.
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Dale, a good description of the photo, I love the last two lines ~`* Hugs Eve
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