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Whisper Soft Into The Night

Distant prayers echo through a lilac sky
light flickers brilliantly in angelic eyes
a yellow crocheted blanket falls to the floor
and a growing heart winks inside.

Kindness breeds kindness in a precious heart
and a kindred spirit lifts and flies free. 
helping our fellow man in need  
forgiving selfishness and greed

Open up your heart and mind
another child feeds a hungry soul
for one who loves to love, the greatest
blessing of all, is seeing the one you love, love

Whisper soft into the night my dire want
let the rains wash down a growing grace
carry off grandeur into a sequel led estate
as a simple smile adorns a very humble face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/4/2017 1:31:00 PM
I like this poem you wrote. I can see all this scenery in front of me,as I read this poem.
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Date: 5/22/2017 2:11:00 PM
A dazzling write Tim, I enjoyed the ride!
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Date: 5/22/2017 8:42:00 AM
I really liked the "...one you love, love" line. Beautiful poem mate.
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Date: 5/18/2017 8:44:00 AM
I don't know how I almost missed this one, Tim, but I even love the title.
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:46:00 PM
I can not improve on the previous comments, they say it all, simply beautiful! Makes me happy when I see others appreciate such beauty!
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:45:00 PM
oh my Tim this poem hits the spot....A definite 7 and fav....Seren
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:56:00 PM
You poem lifts the spirit Tim. Congrats on having this climb the best new poems list. It is beautiful! 7 ; ) Soup mail.
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Date: 5/10/2017 2:23:00 PM
Congrats on making the Best New Poems list with this gem of a poem, Tim.
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Date: 5/5/2017 9:56:00 AM
This is surely one of your best Tim! An all time classic write, such tender thoughts and feelings, just amazing a7 and a fave!
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Date: 4/27/2017 10:48:00 PM
Kindness and Love <3 <3 <3 A Fave
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Date: 4/24/2017 2:43:00 PM
How beautiful...Outsutanding.. another fave
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Date: 4/23/2017 10:21:00 AM
I breathe kindness into your loving heart. What a gentle poem my friend
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Date: 4/22/2017 8:12:00 PM
This is so sweet, Tim. What a precious picture you presented with this soft as a whisper poetry.
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Date: 4/22/2017 12:37:00 PM
Good Afternoon Tim. You truly have beauty within you that you share because it comes through in your work. This entry must be read slowly. Further the reader must pause between stanzas. That is a credit to you and your writing. I also admired in this entry the limited punctuation for the words is all that is needed. Have a wonderful day. May the heart and mind open. Well done entirely.
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Date: 4/22/2017 10:57:00 AM
for one who loves to love, the greatest blessing of all, is seeing the one you love, love...THIS should be a quote that will be shared by all who know how to love. I love how you wrote those lines. So true...Superb. I hope it's ok if I share those lines. I'm faving this poem.
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Date: 4/22/2017 9:40:00 AM
Your poem radiates love and kindness Tim and it will forever whisper soft into our days:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/22/2017 9:04:00 AM
So beautiful Tim :)
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Date: 4/22/2017 8:55:00 AM
distant dreams of kindness open our hearts enough to whisper to our Souls.......great work here tim....
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Date: 4/22/2017 8:42:00 AM
Beautiful poem that got me at the first line. A seven Tim
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