Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Whisper Soft Into the Night

Distant prayers echo through a lilac sky
light flickers brilliantly in angelic eyes
a yellow crocheted blanket falls to the floor
and a growing heart winks inside.

Kindness breeds kindness in a precious heart
and a kindred spirit lifts and flies free. 
helping our fellow man in need  
forgiving selfishness and greed

Open up your heart and mind
another child feeds a hungry soul
for one who loves to love, the greatest
blessing of all, is seeing the one you love, love

Whisper soft into the night my dire want
let the rains wash down a growing grace
carry off grandeur into a sequel led estate
as a simple smile adorns a very humble face

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Eve Roper February 25, 2020 at 12:08 PM Beautiful, Tim

Darlene De Beaulieu June 4, 2017 at 1:31 PM I like this poem you wrote. I can see all this scenery in front of me,as I read this poem.

Keith O.J. Hunt May 22, 2017 at 2:11 PM A dazzling write Tim, I enjoyed the ride!

Scott Thirtyseven May 22, 2017 at 8:42 AM I really liked the "...one you love, love" line. Beautiful poem mate.

Lin Lane May 18, 2017 at 8:44 AM I don't know how I almost missed this one, Tim, but I even love the title.

Arthur Vaso May 13, 2017 at 9:46 PM I can not improve on the previous comments, they say it all, simply beautiful! Makes me happy when I see others appreciate such beauty!

Seren Roberts May 13, 2017 at 9:45 PM oh my Tim this poem hits the spot....A definite 7 and fav....Seren

Connie Marcum Wong May 12, 2017 at 3:56 PM You poem lifts the spirit Tim. Congrats on having this climb the best new poems list. It is beautiful! 7 ; ) Soup mail.

Carole Duet May 10, 2017 at 2:23 PM Congrats on making the Best New Poems list with this gem of a poem, Tim.

John Hamilton May 5, 2017 at 9:56 AM This is surely one of your best Tim! An all time classic write, such tender thoughts and feelings, just amazing a7 and a fave!

Sara Ella April 27, 2017 at 10:48 PM Kindness and Love <3 <3 <3 A Fave

Charmaine Chircop April 24, 2017 at 2:43 PM How beautiful...Outsutanding.. another fave

Darren White April 23, 2017 at 10:21 AM I breathe kindness into your loving heart. What a gentle poem my friend

Andrea Dietrich April 22, 2017 at 8:12 PM This is so sweet, Tim. What a precious picture you presented with this soft as a whisper poetry.

Lisa Ricci April 22, 2017 at 12:37 PM Good Afternoon Tim. You truly have beauty within you that you share because it comes through in your work. This entry must be read slowly. Further the reader must pause between stanzas. That is a credit to you and your writing. I also admired in this entry the limited punctuation for the words is all that is needed. Have a wonderful day. May the heart and mind open. Well done entirely.

Eileen Manassian April 22, 2017 at 10:57 AM for one who loves to love, the greatest blessing of all, is seeing the one you love, love...THIS should be a quote that will be shared by all who know how to love. I love how you wrote those lines. So true...Superb. I hope it's ok if I share those lines. I'm faving this poem.

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 22, 2017 at 9:40 AM Your poem radiates love and kindness Tim and it will forever whisper soft into our days:) Amitiés

Heidi Sands April 22, 2017 at 9:04 AM So beautiful Tim :)

Eric Boddie April 22, 2017 at 8:55 AM distant dreams of kindness open our hearts enough to whisper to our Souls.......great work here tim....

Elizabeth Kinch April 22, 2017 at 8:42 AM Beautiful poem that got me at the first line. A seven Tim