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Whisper

I know the darkness I have felt its hold I heard it whisper “Just let go”

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2024 6:59:00 AM

Funny how deep the darkness and midnight and how in early morning hours it is not as scary…love it…just let go…

Deb M
Date: 3/14/2024 5:12:00 PM

Thankyou sweet Kim…Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/11/2024 5:56:00 PM

your few short lines were powerful! Well done, Deb!! Letting go = wise words. Wishing you a wonderful evening. Hugs, Sara

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:35:00 AM

Thanks Sara! Debx

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/11/2024 4:23:00 PM

Hi Deb , stunningly beautiful in it' simplicity, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:35:00 AM

What a lovely comment Daniel….thankyou so much! Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 3/11/2024 4:19:00 PM

Simple, deep, and true ... just let it go! Thoughtful poetry at its best, Deb. Big hugs, Bill

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:35:00 AM

Thanks my Texan buddy! Debx

Silent One

Date: 3/11/2024 1:24:00 PM

we have all been here.. but we only drown if we stay in the water.. so happy you let it go..

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:36:00 AM

Indeed we have…thanks Mr S….Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/11/2024 9:26:00 AM

Dear Deb, I love how this poignantly conveys a message about the darkness that can sometimes envelop us. The simplicity of your words conveys a depth of emotion, evoking a sense of vulnerability and struggle. You artistically show us our internal battles and the importance of finding the strength to persevere. This is very raw and heartfelt words and I loved it. - Blessings, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:37:00 AM

Wow….thankyou Daniel! Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 3/11/2024 8:07:00 AM

Sometimes thats all we can do, “ just let it go” altho it is easier said than done. Very deep verse this is dear debx. I love reading you always, sending you light today and always

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:39:00 AM

And l always love reading your comments Sweet Ink! Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/11/2024 6:13:00 AM

Good advice, Deb--just let go!

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:38:00 AM

Thanks Vijay….Deb x

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 3/11/2024 4:18:00 AM

A good poem. Well done.

Deb M
Date: 3/12/2024 5:37:00 AM

Thanks Jeanette….Debx