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Whisper

That night, beside a grave, he said that someone whispered in his ear. Was it the wind? We'll never know - the doctor thought he'd died of fear...  written 26th July for Constance's Four Lines contest

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Date: 8/9/2020 4:18:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2020 8:18:00 PM
That would do it for sure. Excellent chuckle. love phyl
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Date: 7/29/2020 5:08:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 11:18:00 AM
A chilling chuckle! Great write Jack. Congratulations for your win. xomo
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Date: 7/28/2020 7:29:00 PM
You have amazing flow and rhythm, Jack... and wit too of course. Well penned. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 7/28/2020 6:00:00 PM
big congrats for a top win, My friend
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Date: 7/28/2020 1:14:00 PM
A creative and thrilling one Jack. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:36:00 PM
ooh how chilling jack, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Some mysteries we we will never know.
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Date: 7/28/2020 9:20:00 AM
Congrats, Jack. Good work. Blessings.
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Date: 7/28/2020 9:15:00 AM
A chilling tale, well told in four lines, Jack. Congratulations on your top win ~ John
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
Nice write Jack congrats on a top win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:07:00 AM
Just stopping back with congratulations on your top win, Jack! Sending love from the Sunshine State.
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Date: 7/28/2020 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on the honor of your win, Jack.
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Date: 7/28/2020 3:14:00 AM
- Jack, congratulates you on your top winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 8:10:00 PM
good one, Jack. Certainly a way to make one die of fear!!
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:32:00 PM
We'll never know for sure, but probably the doctor got it right! This is very good, Jack. Hope to see it on the winners' list. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:37:00 PM
such a vivid story you wove in these 4 short lines. Well done Jack
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Date: 7/26/2020 11:19:00 AM
Oooh, if I heard a whisper while visiting a grave, I might have "died of fear" too. You create quite a story in just four lines. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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