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Whirlpool

She is like a Swedish maelstrom, so deep and dark and dangerous, always spinning out smaller eddies into which I leap, but always carefully, because knowing that to move too close to this awesome pool, to be dragged under to a blissful but relentless depth, where self-knowledge may lull you to destruction from the awful hurt of knowing nature's force just doesn't care, nor have time to care about the fishes and sharks drawn into the whirlpools deep lair. The whirl attracts a wanderers wishes that somehow there must be awesome magic to stop the spin and make the ride less tragic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/28/2009 3:57:00 AM
Your featured poetry is excellent. Sara
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Date: 7/28/2009 2:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 9:12:00 AM
A whirlpool, a rollercoaster of unrelenting fear.. The read, shifted me into your words.. I feel the "whirlpool" sucking me in, terrorizing my inspired mind....New fav....Awesome write and congrats on the feature........:JP}
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Date: 7/27/2009 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2009 6:50:00 PM
Thought provoking! Good use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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