While Sleeping

While sleeping


Why is it mornings, so far in the distance,
flowing from beyond tempered borders
on north facing bridges,
always seem to call in the midst of a dream

When sunrise illusions erase sleep
with mockingbird rhythms sung midst dew drops
lost in the confines of spring
with autumn fast approaching featuring 
shadows stretched 

Long silhouettes on the porch, weathered and beaming,
tapping the front door with frantic fingers,
calling in loud voices of new day charm,
yet quiet in the state of mind seen through blurry eyes

Still, a before smile, brought about yesterday 
forces dimples once again in my cheeks
igniting the darkness with blue sky spotlights, 
streaked of feathered beacons on pale white ceilings

Reminding me, the true dream I have found 
actually lives in my daylight,
slipping around corners and window sill gaps,
finding me on the brink of now,
stumbling my way to where I long to be awake

For my true dream is you, 
who I so desperately miss. . .  

while sleeping


Good morning Soupers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Chircop Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:57 PM
To remind yourself today is beautiful...You can dream again..Those blue sky spot lights in the darkness are there...With dreams comes longing....Hopecully not regret...but just happy smiles.
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February 24, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Pretty much every day to me is beautiful my sweet friend because I am always surrounded by beauty. Thank you Charmaine again for always being so kind to me.
Anish Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Nice romantic work here especially the last 3 lines. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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February 24, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Thank you so much Matthew
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February 24, 2017 at 8:57 AM
What a poem to wake up to dear, Chris! nature's morning song to hear! Wonderful!
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February 24, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
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February 24, 2017 at 7:28 AM
This is beautiful and yes we can still at times make our dreams come true as a new day dawns~Che :)
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February 24, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Thank you so much Cheryl, we sure can. :)
Sands Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Good morning. This is beautiful. I can relate to this. I enjoyed reading this. A fav. :)
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February 24, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Good morning Heidi. Thanks so very much for your kind thoughts this morning
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February 24, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Morning Chris, always so glad to see you. Dreams can be so elusive yet so descriptive, and they can make you either happy or sad. You are so very capable of giving your readers both, that's an art. Sometimes a melancholic and longing art.
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February 24, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Thanks so very much my friend, good morning to you too.
Ricci Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:04 AM
This is an entry that must be read out loud with emphasis. This is beautiful and poetry. May your words be creativity and not a loss true to life. Well done Chris
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February 24, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Thanks so much Lisa. I am happy you enjoyed this one today. True or creativity, pretty much everything I write comes from something I have experienced at one point or the other. I am doing fine today. :)
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