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Morning erupts with a familiar ring wind chimes move and robins sing pages turned and lessons learned where we came, where we were Eyes stay shut with visions true glossy memories of me, of you daylight calls but I fail to rise keeping close you deep inside Wafts linger off a scented breeze putting my wayward mind to ease a Dundee dance of spiritual distress a welcomed arrival so elegantly undressed and where mystery engulfs fantasy her lips leap off into my chapters tearing me out . . . one single page at a time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/8/2018 8:01:00 AM
Those mornings are great when you don't have to rush to get up and can keep the dream going. I actually like, not sure if you intended, the arrow like shape of your poem/could also be an exclamation mark? in line with the title? Or perhaps my imagination... Lovely write Tim, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:36:00 AM
This explains why I sometimes stay in bed. the dreams are nicer! Great write!
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Date: 2/4/2018 12:53:00 PM
This is excellent Tim. Well expressed and ends perfectly :)
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Date: 2/3/2018 1:46:00 PM
- This is Tim's poem that I love :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/3/2018 7:45:00 AM
You've written this so that the reader quickens the pace, waiting for the culmination of your desire, and the lack of rhyme in the last lines shows where the focus has become. No time for rhyming words when love awaits. Great one, Tim.
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Date: 2/3/2018 7:00:00 AM
And the story ends...I loved the opening lines...and of course, " one single page at a time... True words if I ever heard...All the best Tim
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