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Where the Old Sycamore Grew

“to hold, as ‘twere, the mirror up to nature” William Shakespeare, Hamlet, 1601 +++++ The house seemed smaller, seen with older eyes... The street seemed narrower, the trees taller.. Where once were open fields across the road New construction had bloomed The small fruit orchard had disappeared But somehow we knew it would still be there.... Strangely different, ...yet the same There was an unfamiliar small red tricycle On the flagstone path that we laid... In front of this little house that lies Beyond the curve, where the old sycamore grew... Suddenly, thirty years faded into that autumn day And quickly had become a springtime of our lives..... ...of first Christmas trees,..of first anniversaries... ...a place where I cried night after night when mother died... ...and spent long, starry nights holding newborn babes.... Yes....it is all still there, in the little yellow house Funny, but I'm glad they kept the yellow... It has the same white shutters... The little yellow house, with a flagstone pathway that we laid That sits beyond the curve, where the old sycamore grew... ++++++ 4/20/11 Submitted for Constance La'France's Contest "The Tree" By Carrie Richards

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Date: 4/26/2011 11:19:00 AM
Excellent. This was a great 'ride'. Very nice, I liked this a lot.
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Date: 4/26/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Constance's "The Tree" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Carrie! :)
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:18:00 AM
Very nice nostalgic poem.Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win.Thanks for your kind comments at my pages---kashinath
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:34:00 AM
Laine this is so lovely. Beautiful. Many many congrats.
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Date: 4/24/2011 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Carrie
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:53:00 AM
Many congrats on your first place and all your other super wins : )
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:31:00 AM
you are in a roll, carrie.. love your metaphors here.. congrats for the topping the list with hugggs! :)
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Date: 4/24/2011 4:13:00 AM
congratulations on your 1st place win with this vivid nostalgic take on the theme...
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Date: 4/23/2011 8:51:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in the Tree contest.. a great way to celebrate the Easter holiday with this wonderful win luv..
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:36:00 PM
Awesome to see you at the top again Carrie, Congratulations on your worthy poem honor in first place.
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:36:00 PM
Hey, so I gave you that book? I did not even remember. well, I am proud to share a spot with THIS poem.Outstanding it is. Congratulations. Luv ya,andrea
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:33:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your first-place win! Have a happy Easter. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:05:00 PM
This is so very touching, Carrie. I am so happy to see it at the top of the winners circle where it belongs. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/23/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie, on first place in my contest, your poem really spoke to my soul, as I too, went back to my childhood home and my favorite tree was still there, well done, amazing poetry, I will forward your certificate to the address I have~~
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Date: 4/22/2011 8:45:00 AM
a touching piece of moving poetry, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Quite Little Child.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:29:00 PM
It's too bad the orchard is gone, Carrie. Seeing this house again must bring back memories both joyful and painful. I can't go back and look at the place where I grew up. I think it would be too overwhelming now that my parents are gone. Sending winnng wishes your way, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:05:00 PM
carrie, this is just wonderful and I hope to see it very high in the contest. I love these kinds of poems reminding us of the Old days. How things change and yet the remnants are there looking a bit out of place. If you ever publish a book with all the hot poems of yours that i love, be sure to let me know.
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:20:00 PM
Well done....
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Date: 4/21/2011 6:22:00 AM
This is so thoughtful dear poet ! I just love when the poets write to charm our hearts of yester-year ! And what a wonderful thought to prologue this write with a bard we all admire ! Have a wonderful week Carrie....much love, james
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:39:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Beautiful!
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:44:00 PM
Oh, youve done it again..just lovely..it made me think of going back to see the first house we owned..how dare they change the color? lol..BG
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