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Where Poppies Grow

(Paul Callus & Eileen Manassian ~ March 2020)

Where poppies grow in brilliant bursts of red
and bumble bees go searching with intent
she often goes; there sits with dreamy eyes
suspending time, quiescent moments spent.

The wind intrudes on chain of mellow thoughts;
it sifts through youthful zest deprived of guile.
With gaze serene she twirls a lock of hair
as lips betray a fleeting wistful smile. 

Though far away, his presence lingers near;
his kiss like sunlight’s warmth on shoulders bare.
It seems to her, he whispers in her ear.
She breathes the fragrance of his tender care.

A sigh escapes her lips as she recalls
his body close to hers in moonlit night.  
The promise that he made before goodbye
now makes her quiver with a strange delight.

For she has yet to know the fervent thrill
that overtakes the soul in love's embrace.
On his return, he’ll claim her for his own
but now each nymph of nature wears his face.


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© A Callman collaboration~ March 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ricci Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 1:18 AM
Good Morning Paul - Hi. I turned to this entry at random do to the title. This entry is beautiful and yes a wonderful collaboration with the other author. The entry is certainly poetic and has all the elements of poetry attached starting with the title. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful morning and day. Take care
Shaw Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:11 AM
When two poets work in unison, one can never fail . . . : )
Callus Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:12 AM
Thank you my friend. Eileen is awesome to work with! Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:17 PM
A beautiful love poem, Paul. This collaboration is excellent :)
Callus Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:34 AM
Thank you, Angela; I am sure that even Eileen will appreciate your comments:) ~ Regards // paul
Romios Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Tremendous combination of two poets creating a gem of beauty for eternity. Panagiota xx
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May 9, 2020 at 3:04 AM
Many thanks, Panagiota. Such beautiful compliments are truly appreciated. Have a lovely weekend. Regards // paul
Kapoor Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 10:10 AM
What beauties of romance with a wonderful imaginary both of you have weaved in this brilliantly composed poem dear friends. One feels like getting lost in the fragrance of its scenic beauty and your skilful romantic description. Beautiful....
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Thank you Ravindra. You too have weaved some beautiful feedback...much appreciated. Regards // paul
Brul Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 1:27 AM
Vivid imagery that flows like silk in harmony with fine imagination. Truly a refreshing piece!
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 11:11 AM
So pleased that you found it to your liking, JCB...thank you! Regards // paul
Hawkens Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Wonderful collaboration. I cannot spy with my little eye where your words start, and hers end. Seamlessly merging of poetic musings. JC Hawkens
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 11:10 AM
Thank you, JC. Your insightful feedback is awesome! Regards // paul
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April 4, 2020 at 12:48 PM
Paul, Oh the promise of poppies...What a Moondance embrace with each smiling 'nymph of nature's face..Wonderful collaboration from you and Eileen. -Richard
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:35 PM
Thank you, Richard. I am sure that like me, Eileen too will relish your lovely comments. Regards // paul
Ashley Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 8:24 PM
Dear Paul, I was swept up and away by the beauty and romance of your collaboration with Eileen. Rapture rides your dreamy poetic lines with rhythmic grace and your enchanted pens fuse seamlessly to bewitch my passionate imagination. Your muses combine in artistic radiance to light up my heart. Warmest wishes and hugs always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Susan. Your feedback is awesome. With Eileen passion is a guaranteed winner! She always delivers. Hope you are keeping well and safe. Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 4:47 PM
You sparkle of a romantic dream, two talented people creating a beautiful verse.
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Eve. So pleased you found this beautiful and romantic. Hugs // paul
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March 28, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Dear Paul this here is my comment on Eileen 's post of your poem: What a marvelous collaboration and what a glorious result dearest, Eileen and dearest Paul. I have just visited the fields and took a lot of pictures some of which I have posted however, your poem surpasses in beauty any picture of mine! Congratulations to both!
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:34 PM
You are a true gentleman, Demi:) You made sure that you gave merit to both writers...much appreciated...so are the beautiful comments. I can assure you that I always look forward to your pictures (both here and elsewhere). Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 8:35 AM
WoW! Paul, You and Eileen have penned a lovely collaboration . I like how you two used nature to write such a sensual and passionate write. You and Eileen write well together, I am a fan of you both. Have a wonderful weekend my friend:-) Alexis
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Your lovely spontaneous reaction and feedback says it all, Alexis! Thank you for your continuous support; it is much appreciated, mt friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
Watt Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Lovely romantic poem of longing in all its youthful innocence and wonder. "It sifts through youthful zest deprived of guile", so tender. Beautiful collab, you two, a fav!
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Thank you for the beautiful insightful comments, John...and for the fav! Best regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Dear collaborator... came to visit. This is our 14th collaboration! I look forward to many more with you... blessings :) Thanks, everyone for all the lovely comments.
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thank you, dear Eileen. Excuse my belated reply. Looking forward to more collaborations, but I'll have to discuss that with my muse first:) Have a lovely weekend...take care...blessings. Hugs // paul
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March 24, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Oh, I enjoyed this thoroughly, Paul - rhythm/metre, phrasing, word choice, metaphor and imagery, story, romantic crimping - all the elements that pique my imagination and satisfy my spirit! Very well-done, you and Eileen should be very proud of this write - going into my faves. Blessings! :o)
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Thank you ever so much, Greg! Your critique is awesome; this kind of insightful feedback is what I (and several others) look out for. Also, thank you for the fav, truly appreciated. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul
Sands Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 10:18 AM
A beautiful collaboration. Well done :)
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:00 PM
Pleased that you enjoyed it, Heidi...thank you:) Regards // paul
Kannan Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Such a cute poetry ... loved it totally. Great job, Paul and Eillen...
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, Supraja. Lovely of you to stop by. Regards // paul
Deo Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:35 AM
"On his return He'll claim her for his own," may be among the most faithful & romantic words. Well apostle of love, you did it again-- congrats. shalom, shalom Paul
Callus Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Those words were penned by Eileen, Anil....she can be both faithful & romantic:) ... and an excellent collaborator! Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards & Peace // paul
Michael Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 4:38 PM
That's what it represents...the nature of love...A nice romantic one...full of tenderness...
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Arturo. Pleased we managed to get our main points across. Regards // paul
Bauer Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:38 PM
this is the best type of collaaboration, paul - it is absolutely seamless and not at all obvious who wrote what. bravo!
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:02 AM
Your comments are music to the ears, Ilene:) Thank you! Regards // paul
One Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Brilliant collaboration with vivid imagery..
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Thank you from us both, S-1. Your complimentary remarks are a source of encouragement. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful verses of tender, romantic tones--enjoyed the write from start to finish. Kudos to you both, Paul and Eileen on this masterful piece.
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for liking and posting such lovely comments, Vijay....much appreciated. Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Uplifting and gorgeous. Giving hope on a week the world can use some.
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Caren. Fortunately, as the world falls prey to the virus, we can find solace in poetry! Best regards // paul
Raven Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Hi Paul, I agree with Jennifer, this is an awesome collaboration you have both written. Within the gentle words such peaceful emotions displayed. The visions that fill my mind are indeed wondrous. This is romance at its best. This is the gentle poetry that touches my heart. This has to be a fav, Paul. Stay blessed, my friend. Your friend always....Mike.
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Your insightful feedback is a pleasure to read, Mike. I am sure Eileen will be delighted by it. Thank you, and stay safe in these troubled times, my friend // paul
Proxenos Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 11:37 AM
This is an awesome collaboration that you and Eileen crafted Paul - an innocent romance looked forward to through the eyes of nature - he will soon come to claim his love. Blessings Paul warm regards and hugs, Jennifer
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so much, Jenny. So pleased that you enjoyed our romantic co-write. Eileen and I always seem to be on the same wavelength! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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