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Where Mother Nature Sunbathes

Mother Nature stretches across a floor wearing stones and beads of sand. Placidly she warms herself beneath the sun where shore meets the shining waters of azure sea, and in this place I could not love her more! written July 14, 2016

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/24/2016 2:33:00 PM

Hi Andrea, well, i must Congratulate you on your win, belatedly of course. You paint such beautiful scenes with your words. Your poetry always seems to sing and this piece is no exception. You write in such a way that can give the reader a feeling of peace. An excellent work Andrea. Mother nature sings from your pen. This write is a definite seven and a fav. Hugs....Mike. XX

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/23/2016 8:48:00 PM

Andrea, I love how you personified Mother nature! Great visuals! Congrats on your placement! Blessings!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/20/2016 4:36:00 PM

Visually beautiful, Andrea. That's how I spent my morning, enjoying the sea and swimming! Congratulations on this worthy win. // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/20/2016 1:13:00 PM

Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/20/2016 11:10:00 AM

I love the sea and shore of my island. Lovely piece Andrea and congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/20/2016 6:44:00 AM

Lovely, congratulations Andrea...

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/19/2016 11:58:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Andrea ... So graceful write ...

Jesse Day

Date: 7/19/2016 10:11:00 PM

Nicely composed Quintain. Congratulations for your impressive 4th place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/19/2016 7:44:00 PM

Lovely Andrea! Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2016 3:22:00 PM

Reads like a lovely place to be..A winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Francis J Grasso

Date: 7/19/2016 7:03:00 AM

Lovely poem, Andrea. ...Fran

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/19/2016 4:59:00 AM

Very lovely imagery:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/18/2016 7:33:00 AM

You made excellent use of your one stanza.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/17/2016 5:00:00 PM

You sure take one there, Andrea, lovely and visual

Daver Austin

Date: 7/17/2016 10:38:00 AM

The placing of beauty and warm feelings squarely on Mother Nature's wiles is a splendid thought. She can be so devious. Your inventive genius is apparent here. Great stuff. Love, daver