Where Is She/ the Start/ of a Sequel

. Hot soapy water in kitchen sink Dirty dishes on the counter

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/8/2010 1:35:00 PM

that doesn't leave too much to the imagination. yuck!! maxine

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/7/2010 1:00:00 AM

i wonder whose job it is to do those. -Always Lynette

Brian Strand

Date: 2/6/2010 8:10:00 AM

Am liking these flights of fancy Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and observations.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/6/2010 7:55:00 AM

Very interesting, Sara. Can't wait to find out why she abandoned her chores. This reads like the first lines of a mystery. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/6/2010 6:02:00 AM

A very old fashioned and all too familiar scene LOL....a baby to wash..smile...Light & Love

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 2/6/2010 5:43:00 AM

Great imagism Sara.... I se the whole picture

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/6/2010 5:39:00 AM

very very interesting one. God bless dishwashers everywhere! The never ending sequel! :) -Robert

James Fraser

Date: 2/6/2010 5:15:00 AM

Kool imagism Sara, good luck in Brian's contest >> James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/6/2010 5:05:00 AM

I love this one dear,Ow those dishes,they never end:)..Charma