Where Eden Begins

There, beyond the garden wall, 
Lost among the grass and weeds
A wild rose grew beneath the trees
With fragrance blithe, to fill the breeze
And her petals soft as velveteen...

She is watered and fed by pearls of dew
But is hidden there, where no one knows
Where no one sings a song for her
To praise the beauty of her hue...

This lovely rose in solitaire
With leaves of green, and tendrils twined
Yearns to bask in joys of spring...
Where song birds nest, and robins sing
A place to show her grace, sublime...

A garden fair, an arbor high
Is just beyond the other side
She spies a crevice in the wall, 
And through the slit a golden glow
She climbs the stones, and stretches small
And squeezes through, uncurling all
A virgin rose, unkissed, and shunned
Has found Eve's garden in the sun



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 3:00 PM
fantastic poem Carrie love it congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
A   Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:50 PM
wonderful win...PD
De Burca Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Beautiful poem, capturing the wonder of nature even when its neglected. Congrats on your win.
Undertaker Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Carrie congratulations.Extremely wonderful work.Next time i would sit with solid 10 parameters and evaluate.I never expected the support of great poets like you.I evaluated little careless.(: ) Jenish.
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem on nature, Congrats, Carrie
Bateson Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:48 AM
What beautiful words you write. Loved it. Betty
Hunter Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 10:51 AM
This is beautiful...very much so. I loved it...Caleb
A   Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 9:15 PM
CARRIE, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 1:18 PM
((()))Wonderful expressive and creative work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..It has such great flow and rhythm to it also..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:02 PM
Ah Spring, very lovely Carrie..climbing roses are so pretty but oh those june bugs! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Lovely poem Carrie ...Seren
May Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:11 PM
beautiful write ... I like the last line......congrats on your win
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Such a beauty from you Carrie!Congrats on your win.
Macfarlane Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 12:15 PM
This is so very beautiful....love how the rose, rose to the other side....inspiring! Big congrats! Hugs
Gorelick Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Oh Carrie, I dont know how this didnt win a big first. So lovely. congrats. BG
Squyres Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 7:39 AM
Found myself rooting for the rose !! Just love how you did this...beautiful and uplifting !! Congrats on your win !!
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations Carrie :-)
Roberts Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 12:01 AM
Many congrats on your 3rd place win Carrie, this was not the traditional Romantic poem that I expected or that most entered but it is one of the most exquisite poems I've ever read
Chircop Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 2:21 PM
So beautiful your velveteen words dear
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:50 AM
wow, you can do everything, Carrie, and here you are showcasing your ability with rhyme and meter. You will always be free verse queen for me, but you are skilled in everything under the sun!!
Horne Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 3:40 PM
love this one, Carrie - just so beautiful
Ryerson Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:41 PM
I read this 3 times already trying to figure out your rhyme scheme and now my brain hurts (hope you're happy)... I don't know how you do it but you sure do do it and you do what you DO do awful good...when you do what you do...so do it! What, you want me to do it FOR you? (I don't do that) Ha! Gotcha back!...Exquisite and elegant poem my friend - Tim
Haick Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Absolutely beautiful Rhme, dear Carrie! You never cease to amaze me, my friend! Amazing...always! A winner, definitely!! Love, Annalise
La France Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:15 PM
Carrie, a truly beautiful poem, it makes me wish for Spring, big snowstorm here in Ontario, Canada today, best of luck in the contest, constance
Ryerson Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 6:42 PM
I must comment that I have run out of comments to comment on your elegant poems so I have no comment at this time...yet I feel obligated to comment this comment: Are there any comments?...I thought as much!...You are a true treasure, my friend! - Tim
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