Where Do Crickets Go

As winter approaches, their songs die out
Their gentle chirping I can’t live without
     Field mice make their way inside
     Lizards under my couch hide
So what’s with the crickets; have they no clout?

Green crickets in Florida grow quite large
Perhaps in cold times they cruise on a barge
     Carnival Cruise Line reject
     Like Dangerfield, no respect
Not even an honorable discharge

Do they erect shelters ‘neath a snow mound?
Their disappearance surely does confound
     Like snowbirds, do they leap south
     Hearing winter’s roaring mouth?
Could they be in a Mexican camp ground?

The wasps and bees, well, they disappear too
But I give no thought to the stinging crew
     As surely as the sun shines
     I miss crickets’ scratching lines
But in spring their songs will return on cue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ejaz Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Nice . ur poem is realy amazing.i realy like the flow of ur poem.
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Write me a Happy Poem" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:52 PM
Inquiring minds want to know. Where the hell are they anyway:) A fun write Carolyn. Congratulations
Roberts Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 6:23 PM
I have a cricket outside , if I can catch him, he's yours, Congrats on your second place win with this winsome piece Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 5:35 PM
We used to have crickets in North Dakota. They loved to get in the wheat fields. I never see one here in Washington. I don't know why but I expect they find a crevice somewhere there in Florida to survive, Cute poem and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Fraser Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 11:35 AM
When I was young, I always wondered what was making the background noise in films. As you grow older, it's amazing what one learns. In the crickets defence, their chatter is wonderful. It's such a shame that they are an important link in the food chain. Good luck in Francine's contest :)
K. Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Ah, I like the sound of crickets...they are such curious creatures :) but hmm I actually never thought of that-- maybe they rest their weary legs for a bit and just have a vacation ;) and thanks, that poem actually I might enter it for the contest, so weird since I didn't even know that there was a mirror contest....& pls don't think of yourself as an old bat! You are better than that! & you might become one, that is So not good, peeing upside down O_o heehee just want to make you smile ;)
K. Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 11:13 AM
returned soupmail btw ;)
Susan Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 8:57 AM
I will never look at crickets the same way again! you have me wondering now, where do those noisy little critters go? fun thoughts :)
Docherty Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 7:42 AM
A beautiful piece Carolyn, love how you bring in the thoughts we consider and yet barely document... almost brings forth the sounds of nature with it - lovely! Missed you, must get back in swing of things and catch up...
Peranteau Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 6:51 AM
This is really great dear poet friend of mine ! Awesome query Carolyn ! Where do those buggers go ! This write has a wonderful flow dear, and, I'll be researching the thought so I can share this write with lil' Noah, I'm certain he will groove on this one ! Have a wonderful week love...much love, james
Freeman Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 7:36 PM
This is cool,Carolyn as only you could come up with. Agape, Moses
Goff Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Lovely as usual! Carolyn, my southern friend! jimbo
Maverick Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 3:19 PM
And creech creech to you,, ahh the hot nights...air heavy with anticipation.. and the chorus of the crickets now rising then falling...till dawn brings silence...! where was i.. now ? oh yes..! enjoyed this write about those looong..!summer nights Carolyn.. Best wishes 4 contest..
Horne Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 2:14 PM
LOL, I love the phrase, the stinging crew. I don't think we have crickets here, but we get grasshoppers, which are fairly similar (I think). Lovely poem, and many congrats on your win too, my dear : )
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Interesting and entertaining piece. I love the Florida geckos. I am in the middle of moving back to Florida at the moment! :)
Gorelick Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 8:32 PM
LNC at her best..clever doesnt cover it...you made me smile...BG
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 7:56 PM
Yes, where DO they go, CArolyn. And what an unusual theme, for crickets making you happy. That's very nice! Cute lines in this fun poem!
Richards Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 7:40 PM
What a delightful poem, (one limerick is hard to do, but you mastered each beautifully!!)_ This for sure, will put a smile on Francine's face!!
Devonshire Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 10:04 PM
Thanks, Carrie. That's the idea. Francine said she needed something to pick her up.
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 5:15 PM
I guess that they lay enough eggs to hatch out when the weather gets right in the spring..Good idea on which to write a work and great presentation..Enjoyed..Thanks for the kind review of my work..When we get to gether again. I wlll have to get the Potato Pancake recipe..Sara
Smith Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Jimeny! Good question.
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