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Where Do Crickets Go

As winter approaches, their songs die out Their gentle chirping I can’t live without Field mice make their way inside Lizards under my couch hide So what’s with the crickets; have they no clout? Green crickets in Florida grow quite large Perhaps in cold times they cruise on a barge Carnival Cruise Line reject Like Dangerfield, no respect Not even an honorable discharge Do they erect shelters ‘neath a snow mound? Their disappearance surely does confound Like snowbirds, do they leap south Hearing winter’s roaring mouth? Could they be in a Mexican camp ground? The wasps and bees, well, they disappear too But I give no thought to the stinging crew As surely as the sun shines I miss crickets’ scratching lines But in spring their songs will return on cue

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Date: 11/27/2011 10:09:00 AM
Nice . ur poem is realy amazing.i realy like the flow of ur poem.
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Write me a Happy Poem" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:52:00 PM
Inquiring minds want to know. Where the hell are they anyway:) A fun write Carolyn. Congratulations
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:23:00 PM
I have a cricket outside , if I can catch him, he's yours, Congrats on your second place win with this winsome piece Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:35:00 PM
We used to have crickets in North Dakota. They loved to get in the wheat fields. I never see one here in Washington. I don't know why but I expect they find a crevice somewhere there in Florida to survive, Cute poem and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/6/2011 11:35:00 AM
When I was young, I always wondered what was making the background noise in films. As you grow older, it's amazing what one learns. In the crickets defence, their chatter is wonderful. It's such a shame that they are an important link in the food chain. Good luck in Francine's contest :)
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Date: 11/5/2011 11:13:00 AM
Ah, I like the sound of crickets...they are such curious creatures :) but hmm I actually never thought of that-- maybe they rest their weary legs for a bit and just have a vacation ;) and thanks, that poem actually I might enter it for the contest, so weird since I didn't even know that there was a mirror contest....& pls don't think of yourself as an old bat! You are better than that! & you might become one, that is So not good, peeing upside down O_o heehee just want to make you smile ;)
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 11/5/2011 11:13:00 AM
returned soupmail btw ;)
Date: 11/3/2011 8:57:00 AM
I will never look at crickets the same way again! you have me wondering now, where do those noisy little critters go? fun thoughts :)
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Date: 11/3/2011 7:42:00 AM
A beautiful piece Carolyn, love how you bring in the thoughts we consider and yet barely document... almost brings forth the sounds of nature with it - lovely! Missed you, must get back in swing of things and catch up...
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Date: 11/3/2011 6:51:00 AM
This is really great dear poet friend of mine ! Awesome query Carolyn ! Where do those buggers go ! This write has a wonderful flow dear, and, I'll be researching the thought so I can share this write with lil' Noah, I'm certain he will groove on this one ! Have a wonderful week love...much love, james
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Date: 11/2/2011 7:36:00 PM
This is cool,Carolyn as only you could come up with. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/2/2011 4:23:00 PM
Lovely as usual! Carolyn, my southern friend! jimbo
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Date: 11/2/2011 3:19:00 PM
And creech creech to you,, ahh the hot nights...air heavy with anticipation.. and the chorus of the crickets now rising then falling...till dawn brings silence...! where was i.. now ? oh yes..! enjoyed this write about those looong..!summer nights Carolyn.. Best wishes 4 contest..
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Date: 11/2/2011 2:14:00 PM
LOL, I love the phrase, the stinging crew. I don't think we have crickets here, but we get grasshoppers, which are fairly similar (I think). Lovely poem, and many congrats on your win too, my dear : )
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Date: 11/2/2011 1:50:00 PM
Interesting and entertaining piece. I love the Florida geckos. I am in the middle of moving back to Florida at the moment! :)
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:32:00 PM
LNC at her best..clever doesnt cover it...you made me smile...BG
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Date: 11/1/2011 7:56:00 PM
Yes, where DO they go, CArolyn. And what an unusual theme, for crickets making you happy. That's very nice! Cute lines in this fun poem!
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Date: 11/1/2011 7:40:00 PM
What a delightful poem, (one limerick is hard to do, but you mastered each beautifully!!)_ This for sure, will put a smile on Francine's face!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/1/2011 10:04:00 PM
Thanks, Carrie. That's the idea. Francine said she needed something to pick her up.
Date: 11/1/2011 5:15:00 PM
I guess that they lay enough eggs to hatch out when the weather gets right in the spring..Good idea on which to write a work and great presentation..Enjoyed..Thanks for the kind review of my work..When we get to gether again. I wlll have to get the Potato Pancake recipe..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:25:00 PM
Jimeny! Good question.
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