I Wish I Had Wings

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When depression deepens within my soul, life's fabric unravels at its edges. And a part of me is ripped from the whole; I'm not brave, as my ego alleges. I've felt the despair of a lonely heart; atrophied within a bubble of hope. And yet, I still resist pressing restart, even though; it is a struggle to cope. I stock the fringes of fantasy dreams; armed with Cupid's bow, I aim toward love. And deaf to reality's silent screams; I let blind faith steer a course from above. I harbor doubts love will ever find me, and sometimes, I wish I had wings to flee.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/1/2020 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Emile! You weave such a relatable story in your sonnet but I love your vision of hope in the last line of the couplet - "soon enough those fickle doubts flee." All the best my friend!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2020 12:51:00 PM

Thanks Sam, I appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/28/2020 7:53:00 PM

Another masterful write Emile, you always seem to find a way to touch the emotions and I can relate!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2020 6:49:00 AM

Thanks John, I appreciate all that you do for me my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2020 10:34:00 AM

what sad imagery Emile, I dont suffer from depression but have had sleep issues since hubby had his cancer surgery - love the uplifting ending to your sonnet... there is always hope:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2020 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Jan, hope is the fuel that motivates love to bloom my friend, Emile.