I Wish I Had Wings

When depression deepens within my soul, life's fabric unravels at its edges. And a part of me is ripped from the whole: I'm not brave, as my ego alleges. I've felt the despair of a lonely heart; atrophied within a bubble of hope. And yet, I still resist pressing restart, even though it is a struggle to cope. I stock the fringes of fantasy dreams; armed with Cupid's bow, I aim toward love. And deaf to reality's silent screams; I let blind faith steer a course from above. I harbor doubts love will ever find me: and sometimes, I wish I had wings to flee.

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Date: 10/1/2020 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Emile! You weave such a relatable story in your sonnet but I love your vision of hope in the last line of the couplet - "soon enough those fickle doubts flee." All the best my friend!
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Date: 10/1/2020 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/28/2020 7:53:00 PM
Another masterful write Emile, you always seem to find a way to touch the emotions and I can relate!
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Date: 8/29/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate all that you do for me my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/28/2020 10:34:00 AM
what sad imagery Emile, I dont suffer from depression but have had sleep issues since hubby had his cancer surgery - love the uplifting ending to your sonnet... there is always hope:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2020 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hope is the fuel that motivates love to bloom my friend, Emile.
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