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They met beside the water’s edge Drawn by the sound of lapping waves Beneath the gaze of the full moon Attraction blossomed into love. But jealous fate split them apart When out at sea a raging storm Capsized his boat; no one survived. But love like theirs could never die… Twelve times a year she calls his name Beside the sea where they first met His words are borne upon a breeze Her hair caressed; his presence felt… This time her heart cannot endure The absence of his form, his touch She prays to God to bring him back The veil between them falls away Once more he pulls her in to him As fingers trace her tear stained face His lips claim hers in ardent kiss She thanks her God for this sweet gift His breath, his scent, what joy is this? But when she opens up her eyes She is alone on windswept beach Beneath the gaze of the full moon. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ *A Callman Collaboration Paul Callus & Eileen Ghali

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I Am Anaya

Date: 4/24/2024 9:45:00 AM

love's born, passion burns, storms engage, lost love's painful longing. All in this masterpiece. again we...blame it on the moon! Riveting collaboration, Paul hugs~Anaya

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2024 10:19:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback, Anaya. Yes, "we blame it on the moon" :) ... I just read your enjoyable, striking poem on that theme. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 4/24/2024 4:30:00 AM

I missed this beauty three days ago when I visited. What a lovely collaboration between you and Eileen, dear Paul. Gripping from beginning to end. Though sad, at least her memories came to life, if only for a little while. Bravo you two...Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2024 10:44:00 AM

Thank you dear Maria; it's always a pleasure to hear what you have to say. Glad you enjoyed (...same as I did when reading your latest offering about the well travelled road!) ~ Regards and hugs // paul

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/21/2024 2:20:00 AM

Wow an enchanting fantasy love poem so magical with moonlit poetic charm and allure. Beautifully romantic. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2024 2:26:00 PM

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting, Zaynab. Pleased to see you posting on Soup again. // paul

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/16/2024 3:53:00 AM

this is a very good seamless collab from the two of you, poignantly romantic, just lovely...thanks for your visit to my page :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2024 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte. It had been a while since our paths crossed! It was a pleasure reading your poems again! Regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/15/2024 5:56:00 PM

A beautiful collab between two talented poets. Nice to see the poetic talents of you both uniting in a written song of love. Best, SuZ

Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2024 3:04:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments dear Suz. It was such a pleasant surprise having you visit today :) Hope you are keeping well, my friend. ~ Best regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2024 1:04:00 AM

I was like, ummm I am sure I read this, then I had to laugh at myself, Great poem you two!!!! ( yes I read under Eileen spost)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2024 1:15:00 AM

Thank you Arthur...and ummm, that happens to me quite often, but I have old age excuse to fall back on :) Yes, Eileen & I still collaborate, though life priorities don't leave us much time... Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/12/2024 6:06:00 PM

' She is alone on windswept beach, ' longing to be with him again. So tender and emotional. You and Eileen have created a masterpiece. Moments within caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, Paul. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2024 3:08:00 AM

A pleasure to read your "tender caress" feedback, Brandy. Thank you a lovely visit, my friend. Blessings and hugs // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/12/2024 4:39:00 PM

Oh Boy this is romance at its best, way to go you two !

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2024 3:05:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Vienna. Have a lovely weekend :) /x/ paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2024 8:03:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. Hello. Congratulations to both poets on such an entry that defines poetry in expression and emotion. Truly. It was a pleasure turning to your page and collaboration entry. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. Peace and Blessings always (smile)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/12/2024 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Lisa! Your lovely and pleasant comments are truly appreciated. Blessings & Happy weekend, my friend. :) // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2024 7:39:00 AM

A beautiful verse of love and longing--much enjoyed the splendor of your ink in this collaboration. Love echoes from every line!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2024 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Vijay; longing takes love to a higher level! ~ Regards, my friend // paul

Karen Jones

Date: 4/11/2024 7:02:00 AM

Wow an awesome collaboration full of beautiful imagery and romantic angst!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2024 11:10:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Karen. Thank you for the lovely feedback. ~ Best regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/10/2024 4:58:00 AM

Dear Paul...Hope Callman will one day be the name on a book of poetry. :) I love collabing with you, and even if it's only a dream, I'll print out all of our poems and make a scarpbook of my own. Hope all is well. Thank you for your kind remarks on my rejected poem. It still smarts, but you eased the pain.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2024 11:21:00 AM

Callman is already reaping rewards, Eileen! It is certainly a pleasurable collaboration of love! Time permitting, the dream of a book is always a possibility :) Thank you for mixing ink with mine. Hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/7/2024 8:49:00 PM

Hi Paul, I just well written write on Eileen's page. You to write so well together. I am a fan of you both. This romantic write has passion, and sadness. What an amazing love story told by two outstanding writes. Excellent job-Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 4/8/2024 2:15:00 PM

Your comments bring much satisfaction, Alexis...thank you for your generosity and kindness. I am so pleased that you like both mine and Eileen's cowritten work. ~ Best regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2024 12:51:00 PM

such a touching piece Paul the lines flow together so seamlessly. I know how much you enjoy collaborating with Eileen - she has always been so supportive to me in my writing endeavours especially in my early days on soup. So glad to see you posting again too:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2024 1:52:00 PM

Thank you for this lovely feedback, Jan. Eileen and I have collaborated several times, and we both know what we want and how to get there. It is awesome when 2 people enjoy the same wavelengths. Goodnight & hugs my friend // paul

Ink Empress

Date: 4/4/2024 12:10:00 PM

What a poignant write this is dear paul, its so good to see you post, and i love the way youv painted imagery with your collaborative partner, and how both of your lines flow in such a captivating cadence, they go very well together: and yes true love never dies. But fate too sometimes envy love thats deeper that the ocean too. I love the picture too that youv used here. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light. A fave this is for me

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2024 1:57:00 PM

Thank you for the insightful comments, dear Empress! It's a pleasure reading them, and I am in no doubt that Eileen will echo my words. The fav is also much appreciated. Regards and happy weekend // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2024 9:05:00 AM

What a lovely write/collaboration with a great picture. A Fav for me... Have a blessed day writing away........

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2024 11:44:00 AM

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting, Paula....and, of course, the fav is most appreciated!! Regards & blessings, my friend // paul

Gary Radice

Date: 4/4/2024 8:15:00 AM

These are wonderfully regular metered lines that come together to paint a scene that beautifully captures an emotional moment in a poignant story of lost love. My compliments to you both on such a fine collaboration. Cheers - Gary

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2024 11:30:00 AM

Thank you for all points mentioned, Gary. I am sure Eileen too will be pleased with your lovely feedback. ~ Best regards // paul

Tom Woody

Date: 4/4/2024 6:38:00 AM

Eileen did this with you? Glad to see her active again. I still remember the videos she was posting on YouTube. This is sublime. Sometimes memories can be so strong we get lost in the reverie to the point that they feel real, tangible, as you so poetically describe here.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2024 7:26:00 AM

You certainly hit the nail on the head, Tommy! Thank you for the insightful comments.....and for being the 1st to comment :) Writing with Eileen is always a pleasure. Have a nice day // paul