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the tree he planted still stands wrapped in autumn’s fiery hues while his colors have faded …I visit his grave *Written September 30, 2020 For Constance La France’s Dodoitsu contest checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 10/17/2020 6:19:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to what lives after we are gone. Superb penning, Carolyn. Congratulations on your richly deserved win. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
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Date: 10/14/2020 9:58:00 PM
What a truly touching piece Carolyn. The pic really adds to it. Great job. Congrats my friend. JB
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Date: 10/12/2020 4:18:00 PM
Emotive work. Congrats are due so I see from other comments. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/11/2020 12:23:00 PM
Lovely, Carolyn. Heartfelt. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/9/2020 8:06:00 PM
The colors of the season may fade, but the heart remains true, so inspiring, Carolyn~
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Date: 10/9/2020 10:55:00 AM
Beautiful and touching, Carolyn. I love the contrast between the 2nd & 3rd lines. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/9/2020 9:07:00 AM
back with my congratulations, dear. Hope to see a Halloween limerick from you soon!
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Date: 10/9/2020 1:40:00 AM
What a wonderful heartfelt poem, this is, Carolyn, so much visual within it. love it to my faves
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:56:00 PM
such a touching piece and the picture is perfect, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/6/2020 12:33:00 PM
this is truly beautiful - so pleased to see it was a winner. So pleased too that you liked the Hairy Hands xx
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Date: 10/6/2020 7:49:00 AM
Touching and sentimental Carolyn - I'm not surprised you won congratulations my dear friend - you are indeed talented. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 10/5/2020 7:34:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, love your image too.
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Date: 10/4/2020 9:02:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn towin on your touchy poem. Blessing
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Date: 10/4/2020 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful Carolyn. Very moving. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:50:00 AM
A lovely contrast between the rich colors of fall and the shades of dark grief whispering through the rich fabric of this beautiful poem. Many prayers for you and God Bless you, Gina
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:48:00 AM
- I can save my lucky coin for another time :) - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 10:56:00 AM
A poem of deep emotion...your Gators won yest....forget if you follow Gators or Seminoles....I think...Gators!
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:56:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed, CArolyn! And thanks for my win in your contest.
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Date: 10/3/2020 1:32:00 PM
Deep and sentimental poetry with hues of sadness...
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:32:00 PM
A subject that should steal the heart of the sponsor. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:30:00 AM
This is such a beauty for the contest Carolyn. I welcome October with open arms. I am still dealing with the aftermath of my husband’s death in transferring everything into my name and this full moon has been an emotional one for my family. I hope to be back to reading more poetry soon. Blessings xxoo
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/2/2020 11:16:00 AM
You are missed, Connie, but we understand. Take your time and we'll be happy to read your work again when the inspiration hits.
Date: 10/1/2020 11:42:00 AM
Immediately put me in mind of Bobby Goldsboro (?)'s "Honey" ("See the tree how big its grown...") long, long ago. Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/30/2020 1:01:00 PM
very poignant, carolyn! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 9/30/2020 12:51:00 PM
Touching emotions you convey my friend superbly blended in colorful autumn. A tribute to loved one always resonates--splendidly done, Carolyn.
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Date: 9/30/2020 12:36:00 PM
A sad verse Carolyn, colours might fade but not the memories. Tom
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