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When Summer's Gone

As summer exits – stage left Shall we afford it a standing “O” Bask in the fireworks of its bounty Weep for the hoar frost tinged roses Shall we long for one more breath of heat As tans fade on our bus stop children Laugh at the faceless pumpkin gatherings Run through the “pick your own” orchids Will we bid adieu to a dimming sunshine Chase our shrinking shadows through dry grass Rollick in the too soon crisp of leaves Gaze at the arrow tips of geese Let us sit and tell our stories Of secrets shared when summer’s gone

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Date: 7/19/2024 6:54:00 PM
When summer bids farewell, sending autumn's colorful smile my way, my heart smiles. :) I've been blessed with another hot, but sweet summer. It's time to embrace leaves of change. So beautiful and tender are your thoughts. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/19/2024 12:02:00 PM
Love your summer exit, John. Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 7/19/2024 11:36:00 AM
Hello John, A wonderful read about the fleeting of time as summer prepares to lead us into the Autumn. Yes, let us sit and tell stories of the passing of seasons. Congratulations, my friend, on POTD! - Blessings, My Dear friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/19/2024 10:48:00 AM
We will do all the things you've written of and more. I am never sad to bid adieu to Summer. Congratulations on your potd, John.
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Date: 7/19/2024 10:29:00 AM
Oh, yes, John...let's do just that. A beautiful piece, and well worthy of POTD.
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Date: 7/19/2024 9:51:00 AM
John, a truly lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 7/19/2024 9:18:00 AM
John, high fives for this pensive romp through summer memories and summer secrets! There is a tinge of sadness like green leaves tinged with scarlet yet even as we mourn the passing of summer there is a warmth to your words like summer sunshine. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings!
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Date: 7/19/2024 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful summer write. It will be back next year with all the fun. Have a fun day writing away..................
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Date: 7/19/2024 7:22:00 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 7/19/2024 6:43:00 AM
Dear John, Congratulations on this POTD! It depicts the splendors of summer so well. Enjoy this well selected honor..Blessings
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Date: 7/19/2024 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 7/19/2024 5:25:00 AM
I've read so many of these. Yours is worthy. I especially like the last line. What stories will we have to tell this year, once summer bids adieu? Nice POTD
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Date: 7/19/2024 3:29:00 AM
Captures the mood of seasonal transition beautifully...the imagery of summer slowly slipping away in the fading tans of school children, arrow tips of geese etc...all combine to make this just an exquisite poem to read and unquestionably deserving of the POTD ribbon. One of the many that comes from your talented pen...enjoy the light John. Cheers, Paul
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Date: 7/19/2024 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoy your poem.
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Date: 7/19/2024 2:39:00 AM
John, lovely seeing you earn potd! Congratulations! Happy weekend!
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Date: 7/19/2024 1:37:00 AM
What a beautiful picture you have painted, John, superb! Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 7/18/2024 8:34:00 PM
there's this sense of restrained surrender about your summer sketch which punctuates the essence of your verse!...well done!
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Date: 7/18/2024 6:05:00 PM
what wonderful imagery John I especially love the first stanza and the hoar frost tinged roses and the autumnal imagery of shadows and dry leaves - we haven't had summer yet lol:-) hugs jan xx
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