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When Pets and Their Companions Start to Resemble Each Other

I held the leash like it was sacred, I warned that she spooked easy. He knelt down slowly, extended his hand like a priest offering sacrament to a god built from nerves and ribs. He said good girl too fast. She bit down to the bone, drained the smugness from his face— he earned it, the wound. The scar would preach a gospel he'd finally believe in. Now, when he reaches for warmth, it's with permission. His hand flinches even when it's safe. The nerves didn’t come back right, fireworks in reverse: a cold bloom, then nothing good. Still— there’s a kind of comfort in knowing how easily a creature can taste the air and understand they're not safe, sense they're being lied to. And now, I should say, Beware— I'm a lot like that.

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Date: 4/12/2025 11:57:00 PM
Your style is unique, dear Jaymee. "He knelt down slowly, extended his hand like a priest offering sacrament to a god built from nerves and ribs." Loved the analogy. Great poem !
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 4/30/2025 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I really felt something when I wrote this, and it was very unexpected. I sure appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment. Have a lovely, lovely week.
Date: 4/12/2025 9:55:00 PM
'god built from nerves and ribs/His hand flinches,even when it's safe' lines stay with me dear poet, interesting write. Pets do read the air, well said, wish we could gauge people like them. Thought provoking write dear friend, cheers!
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Date: 4/30/2025 5:56:00 AM
Oh, Thriveni, thank you so much. I agree that animals without language can tell us so much if we pay attention. I too strive to be like that :) Have a wonderful rest of your week and thank you again for taking the time to read my work and comment.

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