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When Looking Back

When looking back, I am warmly amazed how selflessly she endlessly loved me. She saved all self-worth not lost at life’s knee with nurturing her mother’s heart engraved. She loved me thru years of diapers and dolls ~ when wee and witchy, she love-turned me calm. She loved me with rocking chairs, back pats and song ~ when a child with nightmares and ouchy wrongs. She loved me with words and embracing arms ~ when a teen with randomly launched qualms. Now, time sits in her final phase ~ where I am parent, she, the child's face. Days as years go by with no joy gained ~ I can only ensure her comfort is attained. I attempt her best fulfillment and emotions ~ through my love and daughter devotion. When heaven posed, may Mama look back amazed how tenderly I was willingly her care devotee. May she know I sought worth from age debris with nurturing that her heart, heart-engraved in me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/2/2018 3:13:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write ~
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:37:00 PM
The depth and breadth of exquisitely expressed emotions is truly stunning in its sincere beauty. Role reversal so lovingly and poignantly penned, dear CayCay. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:15:00 PM
I feel deep emotions in this poem, CayCay, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 9/29/2018 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I am happy to be in your company CayCay. : )
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 9/29/2018 8:55:00 AM
CayCay, this is an outstanding piece reflective of your amazing talent!! I am so moved by your emotive pen and impressed with your flawless application of Enclosed Rhymes. BRAVO - this is already a winner and a fav for me! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/22/2018 1:46:00 AM
A lovely, poignant piece, CayCay, I'm particularly fond of the second verse. Viv x
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Date: 9/21/2018 10:56:00 AM
Awesome write my friend...well expressed ...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/20/2018 9:47:00 AM
Expressed so emotively,so many will have gone through the same emotions...
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Date: 9/20/2018 2:25:00 AM
Parental relationships are often complex, so up and down and yes we often look back and reflect. But we were always right or so we thought. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 9/19/2018 11:14:00 PM
This blows me away CayCay! Relationships with parents are complicated, no matter how compatible. You have expressed this so remarkably in this well written entry. I hope it gets a top position my friend! I love it! : ) Soup Mail
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Date: 9/19/2018 6:23:00 PM
I can relate so much CayCay a very touching rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/19/2018 3:52:00 PM
ohh, cay... undulating as a young summer breeze floating through this page... you are remarkable when it comes to smooth, rich images... happy full moon coming!..huggs
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