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When Life Was Special

Sounds and smells are all around us each day. We can't stop the nerves from sensing even when it brings us sadness. The smell of buttermilk reminds me of my grandmother's biscuits. She made the best biscuits and didn't mind sharing with a little fat girl. She was always glad to see me and pleased to see me eat. Every time I smell listerine I think of my other Mawmaw. She kissed me goodnight after rinsing her mouth. I was glad to stay with them and be loved. My Bigdaddy was the smell of fertilizer, burlap sacks and earth all roll into one. He was a farmer and loved to see the vegetables grow. When I hear an old truck or tractor make a pupupupu sound my heart leaps for joy that meant he was on his way to our house on his old john deere. Ninow was a particular after shave lotion; I never new the brand but I'll know it when I smell it. He also loved to eat soft peppermint candy and usually had that smell in his pocket. He had a loud jovial laugh only a Morgan can know. Have not heard it since his death; he was the last of his family. Sounds and smells bring back memories and we can't stop the flashbacks. Just enjoy the memories and the good feelings of childhood once again.

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Date: 10/25/2010 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2010 3:49:00 AM
congrats on winning 3rd spot in contest.....Luv/best wishes always....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 3:48:00 AM
congrats on winning 1st spot in contest ..... luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:01:00 PM
Doris, you have captured a large variety of awesome smells with this unique and well deserved winning poem. Congatulations . LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:37:00 PM
A beautiful prose work Doris. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:31:00 PM
Totally agree with your last couple of lines here, Doris and isn't it so cool how we can just associate sounds and smells to people we love? Enjoyed this one (& you have the coolest names here too!)--Congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:41:00 PM
Congrats to a former little fat girl..lucky you with such a loving set of grandparents. What a sweet write. BG
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Doris
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Mom
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:45:00 PM
Each memory gave me a big smile, and made me think of these same sounds...same smells...must be those things from that time not so long ago. Wonderful poem, Doris~ Carrie
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:28:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your big win in Frank's contest with this beautiful write and wonderful entry luv.. enjoy your sweet success with a victory dance my friend with luv..
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:28:00 PM
A lovely nostalgic poem that brings back a flood of memories of my own. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:06:00 PM
Excellent, Doris! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 4:59:00 PM
Marvelous! You know how I love a multi sensory verse, there are a few Boo boos I will soup mail you ;) Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:33:00 PM
I can relate to each one..It is amazing what scents play in our lives..I went in a store by the soap isle and Cashmere Bouquet Soap scent radiated out...It reminded me of mother and my memories of her..Good luck in the contest reads like a winner to me..Mom
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:21:00 AM
LOVE this, inspires me to write of olfactory memories that I often have 'bout my long gone grandparents.....I can sooooooo smell my grandfather and that horrible ammonia fertilizer............ Thanks, this is a beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/11/2010 12:23:00 PM
This was a beautiful share of memories and had me thinking, for me places, colors, and music bring back my memories. Things seem familiar and my mind goes back. Thank you for bringing those thoughts to me doreen
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Date: 10/9/2010 4:58:00 PM
Good morning Doris an my congrats for being featured this week! I really enjoyed reading your Prose Poetry. My novel with episodes of my youth will be published this year in Germany. Thank you for all your kind comments and have a great Sunday!...Gert
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:10:00 PM
Smile ~ "Beautiful, 'Dear Lovely Doris Culverhouse,' Just Like 'You!!!'" ~ I love the tenderness of this walk down memories trail along with its wonderful message I believe ~ "Pretty & Sweet" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'Dear, Beautiful Doris Culverhouse;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:04:00 PM
What wonderful write on childhood memories and sweet reminders of that time.. best of luck my dear poet friend. love Michael
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