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When I Tell You I Love You

You are always In my mind day and night And you know this All this time and all these years Come feel my love Let me show you that again And what I mean When I tell you I love you You give me joy You make me see the light Because of you My world is a better place In which to live Your smile brings me happiness You're the sunshine Giving me joy with your love Author Note: This poem was written in the "Quad-Twenty-One" poetry form.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/3/2008 2:27:00 PM
Wow!!!! An enchanting poem - my tribute to your profound love - I am full of admiration. Thanks also for your appreciable comments on my Haiku Disguise. God Bless you, Dorian. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/29/2008 2:41:00 PM
aaah.. its beautiful.. to be loved in this way... such poetry makes this world a better place.. constance
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