Andrea Dietrich Poet Sonnet

When I Died

My soul was body-shaped still when I died.
I looked the same as I had that same day
though no one saw me when I slipped away!
I do recall my sisters as they cried.
I hung around them so their words I'd hear.
The veil becomes quite thin when one is dead!
I heard a lot of funny things they said.
They could not hear me laugh though I was near.
With some things said I did not quite agree!
Such things though do not matter any more.
I felt such charity inside me swell.
If they could truly know pain fled from me!
If I were visible, I’d take the floor
and say to them, “Grieve not, dear friends. All’s well.”

April 19, 2023
for the  I Died Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Michelle Faulkner May 1, 2023 at 2:57 PM I really like how descriptive your first line is, with a 'body shaped soul' - (I have wondered if I want to hear what people will say about me when I pass) and very uplifting closing lines too~

Susan Ashley April 27, 2023 at 5:24 PM Dear Andrea, your sonnet flows with intimate poignancy. I adore the comforting tone of your last line for a lovely finale. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Paul Callus April 23, 2023 at 10:00 AM I love the tone in which you wrote this sonnet, Andrea, a serious topic and yet I can smile as I read it, and say "oh, well, death is not as bad as people make it out to be!" ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul

Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2023 at 7:23 AM Love it! Yes, we know some words would be funny, kind and others not what we want to hear but love comes through! God bless and stay with us, sweet one!

Karen Croft April 20, 2023 at 6:09 AM Beautiful write.

Joanna Daniel April 20, 2023 at 12:42 AM Very good, all's well that ends well, Andrea:) I have written some animal footles inspired by yours, thank you for the inspiration:)

Yann Rolland April 19, 2023 at 7:20 PM i don't like when people die, it is always a sad day, we know there who are our friends, thanks for the deep sharing

Nancy Kaufman April 19, 2023 at 1:29 PM Andrea, I like this write and totally agree that the ones who once loved us are really not that far after all. Best of luck in your contest and be sure to write that eulogy in advance so you won't be disappointed when they eulogize you. You are such a crafted artist..