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When I Am Here With You

We gaze upon the wonders now appearing on this day Such mesmerizing visions born of nature's charmed display The fields aglow, an amber tint as winter spreads its wings A setting sun is smiling knowing what tomorrow brings Twilight twinkles at the sight of apricot and blue For everything is beautiful when I am here with you Good night Soupers

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/3/2019 7:57:00 AM

It is morning reading this, but it is absolutely beautiful and a nice way to start the day :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/4/2018 4:12:00 AM

Oh, I missed these 'Good Night, Soupers' and this poem reminds me of why I missed them. So beautiful and yet sealed as though the poem just wrote itself with the ease of saying good night. You have such talent, I only appreciate it more and more. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Judith S

Date: 1/15/2018 8:45:00 AM

Your poem is a joy to read Chris! The flow and rhyme is so perfect ... and the subject heartwarming and uplifting!! ~ Judy

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/6/2018 9:57:00 PM

Delightful beautiful pen my friend. Hugs :)

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/4/2018 6:29:00 PM

Hi Chris. Lovely scenery you paint. Good night, Dear.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2018 4:06:00 PM

Hi Chris, As always this is a beautiful way to say good night. It's so good to see you posting again my friend. Happy New Year: -) Alexis

Trisha Romano

Date: 1/4/2018 8:46:00 AM

Love the imagery and flow to this poem. Great work!

Darren White

Date: 1/4/2018 12:11:00 AM

Hi chris

Gayle Rodd

Date: 1/3/2018 7:10:00 PM

Stunning! I could feel the goosebumps about the third line in ;)

James Horn

Date: 1/3/2018 5:44:00 PM

Saw your picture on side of my screen, And it may have ruptured my spleen; It I did pinch; Receded an inch; Why would anyone seem so mean.

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2018 6:38:00 PM

I guess liberals are just like that. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/3/2018 11:11:00 AM

A lovely way to wake and greet the day reading your poetry! Thank you for this uplifting poem Chris. I hope you have the best New Year ever! : )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/3/2018 8:09:00 AM

Wow! When you write, Chris, everything turns beautiful:) I was really inspired by this lovely poem:)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/2/2018 6:20:00 PM

Oh, Chris! I am always enamored by your descriptions.

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/2/2018 6:12:00 PM

Oh how beautiful ~ For everything is now back to its charming night that you're back :) Happy New Year my dear friend, Chris! I'm super happy to read you this evening. Hugs and smiles :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/2/2018 5:16:00 PM

chris - i really enjoy your poetry. the imagery is lovely but what really gets to me is your perfect rhyme and rhythm...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2018 4:57:00 PM

Happy New Year, Chris! Charming colors always blend within your poetry! Love it!