When God Whispers

When God whispers, the sky turns blue.
Bright flowers broadcast every hue.
Mauve mountains shade green valleys deep
where dog and boy keep frisky sheep.
Brimming rivers run clear and true.

Forests beckon all creatures who
follow the path of bear and shrew.
Where willows arise tall, but weep
	…when God whispers.

Birds relating the miles they flew
keenly warble their points of view
and I within my full heart keep
gratitude for all things I reap
	…when God whispers.
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Maverick Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 2:28 PM
Well done on this rich piece Linda-Alice The boy and sheep 'stood out for me' We men are only as strong/usefull as Our support by women allows..Such engenders reciprocation, unto power Of each Nation.'
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 3:07 PM
We all need support, and need to support Joe. Many thanks for your visit and kind comments my friend. Linda :)
M  Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 2:03 AM
Oh L.O what a wonderfully uplifting write…..belated Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Fowler Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Hello dear friend. I appreciate you and your sweet comments. LO :)
Me Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Rotten no good people in this world always trying to sugar coat dirty deeds, we all seem to play along!!!
George Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Please listen as God whispers. Don't ever ignore it. Beautiful poem, dear Linda! Congratulations on your POTD honor. Enjoy your day.
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Hi dear Valsa! I never complain about hearing voices, they lead to beauty and salvations. Thanks for stopping by and for the congrats! :)
Me Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 7:17 PM
I don’t really think God is whispering anything too these rotten people, we have a lot to be grateful for the things we have allowed to happen to our neighbors, but good writing ??
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
Nicole Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Dearest Linda, you have such a grateful heart, and knowing that brings a smile. :) This is so beautiful and uplifting, my sweet friend. Your thoughts curl softly around me. I'm ever so thankful for you. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Blessings and hugs, :) Brandy
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:53 AM
So glad that you smile at grateful hearts. Such is the beauty of friendship. :) Many thanks and blessings dear Brandy. :)
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:26 PM
A pretty poem and awesome appreciation!
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Dave! :)
Anaya Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Touching how His whispers made way into you Linda Alice. Every moment I spent reading I felt your gratitude in my heart. Huge congratulations on Poem Of The Day, besti! xXhugs
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Hi bff. Yes, there are so many beautiful things to write about. Thanks for the congrats! big hugs :)
La France Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Linda, lovely poem, congrats on POTD
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Constance! :)
Baker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, Linda! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Bill! :)
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 11:51 AM
If it's ok with you, Linda, I'll SHOUT Congrats, instead of whispering them. CONGRATS!! ~ Gershon
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Thanks for the SHOUT OUT gw. :) I appreciate your comments. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/wonderful "When God whispers" write. And He Does...... I love this one. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win as you go writing away..........
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Hi dear Paula. You are so sweet to read ad comment. Thank you for the congratulations! :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Dear Linda, Congrats on POTD! There's something so peaceful and grounding about the way you capture those quiet moments of connection with nature. You see beauty in the everyday details that most of us rush right past, and somehow you turn those observations into something that touches the heart. It's a real gift. Blessings, Linda, Daniel
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Hi Daniel. It is good to see you. Your kind comments comfort and encourage me. Many thanks! :)
Volumes Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Such a soft touch that says so much. Linda this is truly a remarkable piece from beginning to end. A pleasure to read.
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Hello dear W. I am so happy to see you here. Many thanks! :)
Gondolf Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Love this beautifully written Rondeau, Linda, and its beautiful message as well. Congrats on POTD. John
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:45 AM
You are too kind John. I enjoy writing in this form. Thank you for congrats! :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:42 AM
Linda, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Thank you Tania! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:56 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation....just a lovely, spiritual write.
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Hi dear Sara. So many thanks for the return and congrats! :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:30 AM
Just beautiful. I love this. God bless you and Congratulations on POTD. Love, Gina
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:42 AM
I appreciate your words Gina. Many thanks for the congrats! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 1:40 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Many thanks dear Anne-Lise. :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 12:39 AM
Your strong faith shines through in your well written verse Linda, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Beautiful poem Linda :)
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Heidi! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:35 AM
- A soft yet powerful poem, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Dear Anne-Lise. Thank you for your supportive comments. I appreciate your visit! :)
Godwin Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 9:38 PM
This is lovely. I enjoyed the reading, feeling and even read twice for lingering! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:26 AM
Hi CayCay! I'm glad you enjoyed this enough to give it a second read. Many thanks! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:50 PM
The first two lines drew me in. I just started a study on heaven in which Jennifer Rothschild talks about blue flowers. Just finished the first week and pulled this poem up. God is good that way. Hugs ~ Kim …Fave
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Aah Kim. Your presence is appreciated and I am glad this picture pulled you to its simple verse, fotuitously timed :) I am honored by the fav! Thank you! :)
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:08 PM
Dear Linda, your rondeau is exquisitely composed. Such a tender piece filled with both softness and strength. I’m deeply touched by the quiet yet vibrant beauty of your poem. Masterfully done, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Hi dear Susan. Your comments always so uplifting and encouraging. I appreciate you! :)
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