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When Doves Cry

Oh wicked night of scarlet moon that mocks my groaning, grieving heart your bleeding glow, your crimson gloom the doves cry out as you depart. For he has vanished from this realm his soul has drowned in an endless sea no more can his deep voice be heard night’s lapping waves weep over me. Oh hear the haunting cry of doves that coo incessantly at dawn mad, sleepless nights are here to stay with endless tears flowing on and on. Oh crimson moon, turn white as snow release me from this weighty bond let mourning doves away take flight and banish dreams that come at dawn.

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Mona Ebel

Date: 9/26/2023 3:54:00 PM

That is a very good poem. I hope that I will be able to evoke emotion as you just have in me.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2023 6:36:00 PM

Thank you, Mona! I’m so glad you liked this one. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/28/2023 6:44:00 PM

This is just deeply felt, Laura. And truly beautifully written. I love it! :) hugs ~

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/30/2023 2:11:00 PM

Thank you, Akkina! :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/22/2023 7:28:00 AM

Such a endearing lovely piece of writing Laura, full of great imagery and insightfulness along with nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings always,Gordon

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/22/2023 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Gordon! I appreciate your kind comments. :)

Silent One

Date: 8/16/2023 9:23:00 AM

You've always been one of my favourite poets... i always like your emotive poems that capture sorrow and grief and you express it so emotively through you excellent vocabulary.. you write from the heart and once again that is evident in this poem... I hope you are well... life can be so short...

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/16/2023 12:44:00 PM

It’s so good to hear from you again, Silent One! I’m honored by your kind and generous words! I look forward to reading your amazing poetry again and hope you stay here at PS! We need poets like you! Hugs! :)

Craig Cornish

Date: 8/10/2023 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Laura, there's something about your thoughts that are always captivating.

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/10/2023 1:57:00 PM

I feel so honored by your generous words, Craig. Thank you for my placement in your contest! I always love your contest themes! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/10/2023 9:39:00 AM

What an impactful write Laura full of intense imagery and emotion. This is a sure winner to me!

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/10/2023 1:58:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, John. I’m so glad you liked this one! :)

Robert James Liguori

Date: 8/9/2023 3:29:00 PM

I added this to my favorites. You write a beautiful poem.

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/9/2023 9:20:00 PM

I am honored that you faved it, Robert! Thank you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2023 1:10:00 PM

- "night's lapping waves weep over me" ... a line with a lot of sadness, Laura - A beautiful poem ... in its deep loss - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/9/2023 9:19:00 PM

Thank you for commenting, Anne-Lise. I really appreciate it! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/2/2023 7:44:00 PM

How mournful and touching, love your phrases like 'crimson gloom' and 'night's lapping waves weep over me' - your talent is so striking here (by the way I met our mutual friend John Watts when I was in San Diego last week, and told him how much I like your work)

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/3/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind comments, Michelle! I’m so glad you were able to meet John last week in SD.!Take care and God bless! :)

Mark Massey

Date: 7/30/2023 2:52:00 PM

This is wonderful, Laura - it’s constructed with perfect rhythm and its an excellent contest entry.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/30/2023 3:09:00 PM

Thank you, Mark! I truly appreciate you stopping by and your kind comments. I so admire your poetry! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/30/2023 11:28:00 AM

A beautifully crafted poem of vivid images and deep emotions. A stunning creation.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/30/2023 3:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, sweet Evelyn. God bless you! :)

David Richmond

Date: 7/30/2023 3:03:00 AM

You used the imagery of the crimson moon and cooing doves very effectively in your poem to express the gloom in your heart. Well done Laura. I love your rhymes.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/30/2023 3:07:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by to comment, David. I appreciate it! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/29/2023 10:23:00 PM

What a heartfelt piece. I'm sorry you're mourning the passing of your uncle, dear. May God comfort your heart. Isaiah 57: 1& 2 comforted me when mom passed away. May it also comfort you. Writing is also helpful. Beautiful piece here albeit sad. Big hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/30/2023 3:06:00 PM

Thank you for the condolences snd Bibles verses, as well, Eileen! It’s SO good to hear from you again! God bless you! :)

Tom Woody

Date: 7/29/2023 9:58:00 AM

This seems connected to the previous poem but maybe I'm reading too much into it. That first stanza really grabs hold and the meter is awesome

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/29/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. Yes, this is related to my grief over the death of my dear uncle. You have good intuition!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/29/2023 6:29:00 AM

Laura, I must commend your exceptional achievement. Within this exquisitely crafted poem, you have masterfully conveyed your emotions while showcasing an unparalleled caliber of imagery. Seeking liberation from the burdensome shackles that confine. Thanks for your comment on my page Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/29/2023 7:15:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto, for the high compliments regarding my poem! I am humbled that you appreciated it so. I write so little these days, so when inspiration comes, I take it! :)