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When Colors Fade

once colors portrayed him :) so taken in.... faded they became :(

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:50:00 AM

Great write here, James. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:55:00 AM

excellent piece of very clever poetry, congrats to you being in the winner circle. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:31:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:08:00 PM

oh, how fun. Using those emoticons, or whatever they are called to emphasize it! congrats. Andrea

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 3:02:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:37:00 PM

Glad to see this one in the winners' circle, James. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, James

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 1:07:00 PM

Hi James now I am smiling :) -- since this won! Congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 12:05:00 PM

Congrats James on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory to enjoy today with luv...

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 11:22:00 AM

Chris, I am more than happy that my poems get a viewing. To get placed or with an HM makes me feel so chuffed, and I thank you kindly. Hope your having a lovely day in Canada land. Your poetry Souper friend >> James :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:34:00 AM

lovely James, congrats on your win

Michelle Pryor

Date: 9/19/2010 5:49:00 PM

WOW! LOVE IT OH AND THANX FOR THE COMMENT ON MY WIN

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 7:44:00 PM

Good one. is it for Chris' contest?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2010 10:27:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today James. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

De R

Date: 9/16/2010 5:52:00 AM

I like the way you used smileys...and the way you used colors to portray emotions...well done, James. Wonderfully written!Emilia

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/16/2010 1:08:00 AM

oh, this sure made me sad--, nice metaphor, using colors-- and nice touch with those smileys too... ;) wish you the best in the contest :)-- nikko :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/15/2010 8:21:00 PM

I read so much in your Senryu, James...a lot said in just 10 words! Good luck in the contest! Peace, Audrey soupmail!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2010 4:44:00 PM

i like the ending how you put the colors fade, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/15/2010 2:36:00 PM

I think we see people as we want to see them, James. Too bad they are not always what they seem. Excellent submission for Chris's contest. Good luck! Diane

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/15/2010 1:58:00 PM

wonderful senryu

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/15/2010 1:41:00 PM

Hey James, this is a gem. Can be interpretate in so many ways ;) hope your day was a great one Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 1:41:00 PM

Great entry for the deception contest, James. I'm wondering if you had someone in mind when you wrote this. One of the other entries was about a chamelion, a creature that changes colors. Nice take! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn