When Candle's Dimmed

Late at night when candle's dimmed, it rears its mane and roars
   A terror that's beheld in fright, a scourge forevermore
Its all-consuming grip turns strong men into cowards
   And as the night shows bolder still, it grows and grows in power

When in its spell, the victim must assert himself right now
   For should he linger there, he'll have to yield and bow
To Heaven's plan for him, to be deprived of Sleep 
   The consequences of which Fate -- are often very steep

Arrives the morn midst fresh dew's dawn, shaking off the night
   A thousand cares dispelled at once, as dark gives way to light
What seems so dour but hours ago, now's blended with the past
   Night terror's face is lifted; joy and peace are night at last

The thieves of sleep are many; bold the morn's ascent
   As rooster clears his hearty throat, the Devil needs repent


                            May 27, 2019
                    Sonnet -- Iambic Pentameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mchattie Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 8:31 PM
Always darkest before the dawn. Wonderful piece of writing my friend. Have a great day.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:31 PM
David, it's an honor to read your generous praise. Coming from you, I am duly humbled. Have a wonderful evening! ~ Gershon
B. Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 5:07 PM
An extraordinary sonnet, my friend.. Really enjoyed !! This shines.. A fave for me.. Have a blessed day..
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:30 PM
Thank you for your enthusiasm, Robertina, and especially for the FAVE. It means a lot to me. Thank you for letting me know. Best wishes always, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Excellent! Love that last line. Unfortunately the devil never will repent.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:30 PM
Spot on comment, Kim. Thank you so much, as always. Warmest wishes for Memorial Day. ~ Gershon
Shaw Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Hi Gershon, a powerful poem of menacing imagery, chances of sleep tonight do not bode well, Regards, Kevin
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Here's hoping that the imagery will fade and that you will enjoy a pleasant night's sleep, Kevin! Best wishes, Gershon
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