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When All the World Is Quiet - Its Too Late Version

WHEN ALL THE WORLD IS QUIET (It’s too late version) When all the world is quiet And the night is fully deep, A mystic moon is watching All the places underneath. My thoughts like panthers moving through the jungle, they do creep. Among the lingering shadows lies a naked hairy beast… When all the world is quiet Amid the pine trees night is dark, The Hunter charges east-southeast As Venus makes her mark. But its not these welcome visitors That wretched me from my sleep, For they have come, the moving lights, It’s their secrets I can’t keep. When all the world is quiet People would not believe The shower of light, the dusting Of illuminating cosmic debris; “Not of this Earth”, I tell you, “Embrace the night”, they implore. But they often go to places I’d rather not explore. When all the world is quiet Hairy beast meets Neo-man They’ve been coming here for millennia, Our consciousness to expand. Too many gods, countless laws And many borders defended, The message they send is simple, Life as we know it has ended. When all the world is quiet Listen if you can Peace and love resound over The noise of clumsy man. Aspire to the Divine, my child, Let children lead the way. The music of the spheres is love, Oh, let the music play.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/12/2017 8:58:00 AM
Dark and deep Phil. Congratulations on your win Phil! :-)
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Date: 3/21/2017 3:09:00 PM
Splendid.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/21/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Leonardo, I wondered but it is okay if you (or anyone else) doesn't get it sometimes my poetry can be hard to understand. Anyway, ciao.
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Leonardo Edwards
Date: 3/21/2017 3:10:00 PM
That was suppose to be “splendid!”.
Date: 3/16/2017 3:40:00 PM
Back for congrats!!
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations Phil! Great rhyming :)
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/16/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Heidi for your support.
Date: 3/16/2017 8:48:00 AM
Wonderful rhymes Phil with deep meaning congrats on a great win!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/16/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thanks John I appreciate it.
Date: 3/14/2017 9:07:00 AM
A magnificent write indeed Phil!! Let us all aspire to the Divine for sure. (I've touched on this notion too, at times, in some of my narratives.) Superb in every respect!! A FAV!! Cheers, Gary
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/14/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Gary your comments are always thoughtful and appreciated. Ciao.
Date: 3/10/2017 9:11:00 AM
I don't cry easily, but...this is too gorgeous not to.
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Date: 3/10/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Gerald, it means a lot to know that I have touched you that way. Now you're making me cry...
Date: 3/8/2017 5:23:00 PM
Excellent poem, Phil, wonderful visualisation. // Barry
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:15:00 AM
Well done.
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Date: 3/3/2017 11:04:00 PM
I've been away from writing and also the Soup. I just now received your soupmail and I have obliged your request. I like the shorter version better but that's because I'm partial to the "less is more" but my poetry is often "more than less" none the wiser this poem is excellent and I would only change the phrase "life as we know it has ended" only by adding one small word to aid in flow. Maybe I'm wrong but my quick read didn't flow quite as good as the rest of this nearly flawless rhyming poem
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/4/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thank you ZiNk for your candid remarks, I appreciate your insight and time and I am always trying to improve. Namaste.
Date: 2/26/2017 7:04:00 AM
Lovely! Yes, let the children lead. 7
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/27/2017 9:15:00 AM
We make them grow up too fast, they need to be as innocent for as long as possible. Thanks Kim.
Date: 2/25/2017 7:45:00 PM
Such a great message being portrayed :) Great job!!
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Date: 2/24/2017 1:24:00 PM
A 7 for this magnificent perfect piece!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/24/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Maureen you are too kind.
Date: 2/24/2017 10:42:00 AM
This is wonderful, Phil. Well written and great message:)
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/24/2017 4:20:00 PM
Glad you liked it Daniel. Ciao.
Date: 2/24/2017 10:02:00 AM
Hello Phil, in my books this full-length version of your earlier write is a masterpiece indeed - poetry in motion that reflects the thoughts of the artist as he spashes just the right colors from his palette to make his canvas come alive. I love it! BRAVO and a 7! Best wishes. Pandita
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/24/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Pandita for your kind remarks.

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