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if i wanted to kiss you would you stand still if i wanted to be with you could we both time kill if i held your hand would you understand or carress your cheek would you be meek if i whispered in your ear would you hear if i look into your eyes would they lie and tell me something else that my heart is saying if i wanted to love you with all my heart would that be smart if i made you my reason to live would it be worth everything i give and if i said i love you would you hold those words above you forsaking all others as the preacher said being mine and to no others lead then my heart belongs to you remember, to no other will i be true with this poem i make this pact and with my hopes i hope you act fill in all the love that i lack and as for doubts we could fill up the cracks

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Date: 4/11/2013 5:52:00 PM
nicely done john,,, thank yu for reading Over heard conversation of course we should always talk nice to each other, but that would be a perfect world ;}
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:33:00 PM
Fine romantic work here. Doubts can be worke out as you say. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/10/2012 8:14:00 AM
thank you for giving me freedom to imagine this one is only for me, Ivy
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Date: 4/13/2012 3:21:00 PM
For you Ivy.
Date: 3/21/2012 7:03:00 PM
This is not only lovely but loveliest.
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:31:00 PM
This is a really nice love poem,john.
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:54:00 AM
So so very beautiful John..This poem goes to my favourites... Charma
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Date: 3/10/2012 1:01:00 PM
Very beautifully written, John. I hope you do not see lies when you look into her eyes. You have so much to offer a woman that your faith alone would "fill up the cracks." Wonderful poem, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2012 9:52:00 AM
Must be busy too as I see no new postings. Seems time slips away and have been busy myself too. Thanks for you comments. love phyl
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:27:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Very well-written.
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:15:00 PM
John this is beautiful. I am having computer problems so I could not get back to you sooner to thank you for your kind comments on my poem. It no way compares with yours. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this piece today John..)
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Date: 3/4/2012 10:16:00 AM
simply and utterly a wonderfully written poem and if you find out "when" can you please advise me your's in solidarity ~PHREEPOETREE!~ free cee!~
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:28:00 PM
writen for someone that did'nt last two weeks.
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Date: 2/28/2012 7:27:00 AM
When is a nice thought out poem on love and hopes and yes dreams of that right person in your life to fill the heart and soul. love phyl
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Date: 2/24/2012 11:24:00 PM
I am here tonight, reading your write, and everything looks right.
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:33:00 PM
JOhn,,, hi... a nice poem... you have a big and great heart... she's a lucky person...always..pd
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:24:00 PM
Well written poem, I enjoyed reading every word of it, the verses had me captivated especially then my heart belongs to you, remember no other will I be true. (smile) A lucky person
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