John Loving Iii Poet Personification

When

if i wanted to kiss you
would you stand still
if i wanted to be with you
could we both time kill
if i held your hand
would you understand
or carress your cheek
would you be meek
if i whispered in your ear
would you hear
if i look into your eyes 
would they lie
and tell me something else
that my heart is saying
if i wanted to love you
with all my heart
would that be smart
if i made you my reason to live
would it be worth everything i give
and if i said i love you
would you hold those words above you
forsaking all others as the preacher said
being mine and to no others lead
then my heart belongs to you
remember, to no other will i be true
with this poem i make this pact 
and with my hopes i hope you act
fill in all the love that i lack
and as for doubts
we could fill up the cracks

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Debbie Duncan April 11, 2013 at 5:52 PM nicely done john,,, thank yu for reading Over heard conversation of course we should always talk nice to each other, but that would be a perfect world ;}

Matthew Anish June 17, 2012 at 6:33 PM Fine romantic work here. Doubts can be worke out as you say. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Ivy Vresk April 10, 2012 at 8:14 AM thank you for giving me freedom to imagine this one is only for me, Ivy John Loving Iii April 13, 2012 at 3:21 PM For you Ivy.

Chittaranjan Dey March 21, 2012 at 7:03 PM This is not only lovely but loveliest.

Andrea Dietrich March 16, 2012 at 10:31 PM This is a really nice love poem,john.

Charmaine Chircop March 15, 2012 at 9:54 AM So so very beautiful John..This poem goes to my favourites... Charma

Carolyn Devonshire March 10, 2012 at 1:01 PM Very beautifully written, John. I hope you do not see lies when you look into her eyes. You have so much to offer a woman that your faith alone would "fill up the cracks." Wonderful poem, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock March 9, 2012 at 9:52 AM Must be busy too as I see no new postings. Seems time slips away and have been busy myself too. Thanks for you comments. love phyl

Jenny Emelander March 7, 2012 at 11:27 AM Wonderful poem! Very well-written.

Marycile Beer March 6, 2012 at 4:15 PM John this is beautiful. I am having computer problems so I could not get back to you sooner to thank you for your kind comments on my poem. It no way compares with yours. God Bless, Cile

Joe Maverick March 5, 2012 at 11:29 PM Enjoyed reading this piece today John..)

Jeffry Cohan March 4, 2012 at 10:16 AM simply and utterly a wonderfully written poem and if you find out "when" can you please advise me your's in solidarity ~PHREEPOETREE!~ free cee!~

John Loving Iii February 28, 2012 at 8:28 PM writen for someone that did'nt last two weeks.

Phyllis Babcock February 28, 2012 at 7:27 AM When is a nice thought out poem on love and hopes and yes dreams of that right person in your life to fill the heart and soul. love phyl

Robert Pettit February 24, 2012 at 11:24 PM I am here tonight, reading your write, and everything looks right.

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2012 at 10:33 PM JOhn,,, hi... a nice poem... you have a big and great heart... she's a lucky person...always..pd

Shirley Long February 24, 2012 at 9:24 PM Well written poem, I enjoyed reading every word of it, the verses had me captivated especially then my heart belongs to you, remember no other will I be true. (smile) A lucky person