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Stars Backgrounds - Wallpaper Cave

what we call stars are small openings in the cover of our universe creative energy shines through, drawing us back to our origin

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Date: 2/13/2024 8:12:00 AM
Such a grand way of looking at the stars, Bill. We are drawn back to our origin when we contemplate the big bang of formation. Be well. Brian
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Date: 2/13/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Brian. If we choose to believe that all things are circular, where else could we be headed, but back to our beginning? Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/11/2024 1:34:00 AM
It sure as heck does look like that...
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Date: 2/13/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Robert. Good to see you've dropped by to read and comment on my poetry, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill
Date: 2/7/2024 12:39:00 PM
A wonderful thought Bill.
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:22:00 PM
Thanks, Jerry. They come to me sometimes. Bill
Date: 2/7/2024 1:30:00 AM
Well the saved followers if Christ are the stars also If I read my bible correctly Bill..Strange about Hollywood 'creating stars?' Which to me seems All ratger counterfeit action..makes you wonder Who their earthly boss is.??
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:23:00 PM
Good question, Joe, I sure don't have the answer. Thanks for the visit and comment, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/6/2024 10:47:00 AM
Your poem takes a fresh look at stars. Delightful.
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Date: 2/6/2024 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda. The thoughts come into my mind and sometimes I decide to just share them and let others think about some of the less usual thoughts I think about. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/6/2024 7:36:00 AM
This is eerily stunning Bill. I like it a lot. :). PS: Please let Sara know I am having trouble posting comments to her site. I get a 500 error each time I try - had this happen on Anaya's site as well. PS Tech cannot duplicate the issue, so cannot remedy. I'll keep trying. About 1 in 10 get posted to Anaya.
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Date: 2/6/2024 7:51:00 AM
I get the same message every time I post a comment to Valsa. I they show up eventually on the screen, I'm not sure if it shows up on hers or not? I let her know. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/6/2024 4:11:00 AM
Oh wow, your imagination is absolutely profound, dear Bill! This is such a spiritual and soulful poem, representing that cosmic light that uniquely calls our name and pulls us back to the origin. What a magnificent idea, in the first place.. I should FAV this without any delay...a breathtaking monoku poem, filled with wisdom and philosophical richness. It's always a pleasure to read your insightful words. Sending many best wishes and light your way. Keep writing and shining :)
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Date: 2/6/2024 8:00:00 AM
Thank you for the comment, Hiya. I sometimes see things in a different light than most and just write about the thoughts that come to me. They may not be fact, but they are the way I think at the moment I'm writing them. Have a great week1 Bill
Date: 2/6/2024 4:07:00 AM
Hi Bill, you got me dumfolded. Telescopes prove the existence of planets and stars.
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Date: 2/6/2024 7:56:00 AM
Metaphorically, I was using the cover as the Void of darkness that was the setting for God's creation or the beginning of eternity. I wasn't writing as fact, merely as a thought. Thanks for your comment, Bill
Date: 2/6/2024 3:31:00 AM
wow, hubby, your Monoku is beautiful, insightful, and subtly powerful!! After reading it, I was left almost breathless. Your words are like stars, drawing me nearer to you and to our oneness. Hugs, just me
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Date: 2/6/2024 7:47:00 AM
Your words humble me at times, Sara. Thank you, Bill

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