What Turned To Stone

"What are the roots that clutch, what branches grow out of this stony rubbish?" - T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land.
Who tries to grow out of this cold. Unfolding wings from nothing, nurtured with meager protection, nourished with watery milk. Whose fingers try to burrow the dry clay, the impenetrable rock. Who wants to excavate what turned to stone? In preservation conservation hides, in self protection arms as withered branches wrap around what turned to stone, knowing that deep inside one little ember glows, still glows. There one small drop of water remains, once a pool in polished rounded slab of stone, rubble, remaining consciousness
This is what grows, this is one seed of hope, one tiny root, one drop of water, one cinder of warmth, one knowing once belonged to a field of glacier. While only cold remains in once warm heart that blindly searches, searches.
*** March 25, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 3/30/2017 8:31:00 AM
Great poem, Darren, and lovely message. Sorry to hear you're in the ICU - sending all the best wishes.
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Darren White
Date: 3/31/2017 12:07:00 AM
Thank you Agnes, I hope I can move to a normal hospital wing soon :)
Date: 3/28/2017 4:40:00 AM
I turned to your page while you are in ICU. But never expected this! You are amazing mate! Absolutely jaw dropping poetry!
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White Wolf
Date: 3/31/2017 1:55:00 AM
Nothing can stop you, my friend! /|\
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Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:21:00 AM
still in icu but i can write again budgie, and thank you
Date: 3/26/2017 6:04:00 PM
From your poem I turned to stone.... Come and find me I'm alone...
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Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:21:00 AM
i will Pashang :)
Date: 3/26/2017 3:58:00 PM
Stunning, you are a true poet! I am at a loss for words!
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Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:20:00 AM
we will find outr words again when i have energy to comr join your chat :)
Date: 3/26/2017 2:15:00 PM
Cool, Darren. Eliot's 'The Waste Land' - has some monumentally great lines. Call me a philistine, perhaps, but I think it goes on too long, tries to do too much. Many, many people think "greatest poem ever," but I cannot agree.
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Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:20:00 AM
thtat's ok doug and i don't disagree at all :)
Date: 3/25/2017 12:42:00 PM
Your work shouts of a subtle wisdom gently distributed throughout your poem. Emile.
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 1:04:00 PM
Emile, thank you so very much for your kind words :)
Date: 3/25/2017 12:23:00 PM
Hopefully, the searching heart will finally be still and let the seed grow. Beautiful poem.
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 12:33:00 PM
I hope so too, Thank you Sunlite :)
Date: 3/25/2017 11:42:00 AM
Enjoyed this free verse (what my long-ago class termed CONCRETE VERSE/poem). It speaks to me of nature or people, however smothered or wilting due to factors like neglect, harbor a spark of life (God?) and life always surprises us with resilience. Thanks for sharing, Poet Darren White.
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 1:01:00 PM
We have the Concrete form here, on Soup. But it is only one part of my poem (the last one) that can count as a concrete. But thank you so much for your comments :)
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