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What Time Would It Be

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if all the clocks stopped, what time would it be?

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/13/2023 6:22:00 AM

Whoa thats brilliant! A thought provoking and soulful monoku! I love this beautiful sara. Made me think. And i wonder what time would it be, time to startover?

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/13/2023 8:11:00 AM

thanks, Ink, for your enthusiastic response! I'm glad you found it thought provoking. Starting over...sounds like a great idea. I suppose we all start over each day. Thanks my dearest, Ink, for your ongoing support of my creative endeavors. You lighten my days, Sara

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 10/13/2023 3:53:00 AM

There will always be a local time. Blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/13/2023 4:14:00 AM

Yes, local time...but I ponder "What does local time mean?" My mind rambles sometimes :-) Thanks for stopping by, Victor. I appreciate your consistent support, have a blessed day, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/12/2023 8:15:00 PM

Unchained, pure experience.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/13/2023 4:13:00 AM

I agree...timelessness would be perfection. Thanks for your visit, Mat. Enjoy your day, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/12/2023 7:44:00 PM

Time for a reinvention?! ~ Klok Ng In

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/13/2023 4:13:00 AM

Reinvention--I agree...the world needs reinvention...to create more kindness and humanity rather than hate and destruction. Thanks for stopping by, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/12/2023 5:06:00 PM

Time to live as nature intended.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/13/2023 4:12:00 AM

great idea! thanks for stopping by & have a pleasant day, Sara

Mark Hughes

Date: 10/12/2023 4:42:00 PM

A very perplexing question, dear Sara! I believe it will be time for me to ponder the question.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 4:57:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and for your clever response. Be careful, though. Too much pondering makes for deep wrinkles :-) Enjoy your evening, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 10/12/2023 4:02:00 PM

Time to enjoy life without time limit constraints.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 4:56:00 PM

I agree, Lin. Life without restrains would be heavenly. Hope you have a 'heavenly' evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2023 3:37:00 PM

Time to look over your shoulder…

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 3:45:00 PM

hmmm...interesting thought. Thanks for stopping by and have a great evening :-) Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 10/12/2023 3:34:00 PM

Hmmm would it be judgement day? Good question Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 3:45:00 PM

Wow, hadn't thought of that...thanks for stopping by, Sara

Paul White

Date: 10/12/2023 2:54:00 PM

It would be groundhog day. And if the time stopped then would you stop Getting old. This makes me think thank you Paul

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 3:25:00 PM

thank you for stopping by, Paul. I got a kick out of your Groundhog Day comment. :-) I also like the idea of not getting old...I am glad the poem made you think. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Terry Flood

Date: 10/12/2023 2:31:00 PM

Erm….Gin o clock? Good question, Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 3:25:00 PM

witty response...thanks for stopping by and for making a comment. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/12/2023 2:14:00 PM

Iced zero..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 3:25:00 PM

that's interesting..must ponder that, Sara