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What Might Have Been

I know I could have loved you if you hadn’t been so young. I was older by some years, more than a few. I haven’t thought about those days for quite a long, long, while. Today I’m wondering if you ever do. We each went on with others and I’ve had a happy life. I hope your love was everything you needed. Now we’re right back where we started as we’ve each been left alone and the distance once between us has receded. The rules we lived by in those days no longer seem to matter. No law says that the man must be the older. We have reached the age of reason. We can do just as we please. And my head would lie so nicely on your shoulder. Won 7th place

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Date: 7/5/2011 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Cougar Effect" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:00:00 PM
I love the lovely way you ended this one. It's so logical! congrats, joyce.
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Date: 7/3/2011 12:56:00 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Joyce : )
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Date: 7/3/2011 4:25:00 AM
So full of wisdom and so touching as always and as only you can write. Many congrats on your SUPER EWIN, Joyce. Lainie
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Date: 7/3/2011 2:07:00 AM
This is such a sweet write Joyce, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;-) love Wilma
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:25:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your dynamic win in the contest with this awesome write my friend.. enjoy the win and the 4th celebrations.. we are at seashore watching fireworks right now ..oh boommmm kaboommmmm...
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Date: 7/2/2011 4:46:00 PM
My congratulations on the win on the lovely entry to my contest, Joyce
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:36:00 PM
I am 6 years older than my wife, my mom was married to one of her husband who was 6 years younger than her. so anyway this was a great piece and very romantic no matter the outcome, it was a touching piece. thank you for commenting on The old School Yard.
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Date: 6/11/2011 10:15:00 AM
Hon, a three-year age difference is nothing now. What a shame that prevented you two from getting together. (And all my jeans have elastic waists...well, at least the ones that fit do. LOL) I would rank your entry for the jeans contest higher than mine. It touched my heart. Mine was just playful. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:35:00 AM
Indeed, the rules have changed now, Joyce. There are many happy couples with women who are older than the men. At one time this was regarded as unseemly, but not any more. If this is based on a true reflection, I hope you can find out what became of this younger fellow. Superb entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2011 6:51:00 AM
Wow.Was moved by this.I once had a love I could not have at the time.Very painful and moved on and am happy but the question in my head always stirs at the surface.Great job!And thanks for stopping and congratulating me on my win.Have a great day love....
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Date: 6/11/2011 4:10:00 AM
Lovely, wistful write. Time can change situations, for good or bad. All we can do is trust our hearts and apply common sense. A very nice poem, Joyce. Warm regards, Robert.
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