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What it is to fly

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mid flight - they stopped a last journey captured and framed essence of all that it is to be beautiful right before the end, they soared held in a moment where time stood still to be gazed upon in wonder wearing the raindrops as a coat perfect posture emblazoned with colour to exit in style time has ravaged everything but spirit and I see you

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 3:15:00 PM

Watching leaves float to the ground is hypnotic to me. A lovely poem to describe the full journey. Thanks for sharing in your own unique way, DD. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 3:24:00 PM

I decided it slightly mould it to the body aches whilst spirit soars contest as I've not been happy with anything I've written for that. This is unlikely to be deep enough though I think. Thanks for your comment

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 2:32:00 PM

what a delightful poem, Di11y. You've beautifully captured the flight of the leaves, exiting in style! So true of us humans; time ravages everything but spirit! Well said...loved this one, enjoy your evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 2:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words Sara - they looked so beautiful I had to take a picture and write about them x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 1:24:00 PM

I enjoyed your write/picture. Pretty leaves this time of the year. Have a blessed day writing away................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 1:31:00 PM

Thank you Paula - they are beautiful x