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Transcendence by Artist, Kavita Nayar 

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No urge remains to proclaim how bliss has changed our earth game by igniting feeble form, with magnetic currents warm. What's there to say about this when God Himself ushers bliss, where all we do is be still, surrendered thus to His will. Perhaps most cannot let go and follow bliss beats mellow, for to do so, thoughts must rest, that we may be by God blest. Each time we exhale, we die yet lower mind, don't decry, chasing objects of desire, foolishly until we tire. When death nears, it's then too late to slow down our thought flow gait, thus it's best we do so now, right of way, to love allow. Each of us must ourselves choose, body or soul, what's our muse? There’s then no urge to proclaim how bliss changes our earth game. 02-October-2022

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Date: 10/2/2022 12:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/2/2022 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sara :)
Date: 10/2/2022 9:00:00 AM
Oh to learn stillness and allow thought forms to just be like clouds in the sky. This is my daily prayer. Thank you for sharing your wisdom!
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Date: 10/2/2022 4:02:00 PM
So happy these words resonate in your glowing heart, Becky
Date: 10/2/2022 5:58:00 AM
Seeker, wonderful write and your words ring true to me, until we slow down we will never find bliss God has offered to us. In this rush, rush, society we need "to stop and smell the flowers", Constance
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Date: 10/2/2022 4:01:00 PM
Yes ~ that’s it! Couldn’t have said it better myself :)

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