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What Is Happening To Our World

The kids and Mom are shopping at the mall. The kids tell Mom “Shut up!”—and Mama does! They say, “Buy that!” “Buy this!”—and Mama does. Do they respect her? No! They’ve not been taught Old friends who meet for lunch, preoccupied with Smart Phones, talk—but can’t resist a peek. They quickly leave just after that last bite. They must catch up on social media! . A twelve-year-old is driving Daddy home. Well, Dad can’t drive. He’s had too much to drink. Tonight, while Dad’s passed out and Mama’s gone to gamble, he’ll take care of little sis. A forty-year-old teacher lies in bed. Beside her is a student—age fourteen. Not only does she steal his innocence; she gets him hooked on drugs and alcohol. A toddler shoots a five-year-old because the gun was left in reach of little arms. Another home’s in flames. Kids left alone found matches—and the list goes on and on . . . . March 5, 2017

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Date: 4/10/2017 3:24:00 PM
Interesting set of anecdotes painting a mosaic of modern life. Congratulations on your win Janice! :-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/10/2017 5:21:00 PM
Mark, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 3/13/2017 9:26:00 PM
A well written description of life today. So sad! Congrats on your 2nd place win, Janice! Blessings, Kim
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/13/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Janice
Date: 3/13/2017 12:34:00 PM
on and on, congratulations on an excellent write Janice...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/13/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie. Janice
Date: 3/12/2017 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations Janice!! Well done my friend!! :) Big Hugggs deb
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Deb! Janice
Date: 3/12/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Janice for this awesome write, a terrible but realistic view of this world, congrats on a great win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2017 6:04:00 PM
Thank YOU, John--for the nice comment, for sponsoring, and for placing my poem! Janice
Date: 3/6/2017 12:15:00 AM
I'm appropriately sad now. All of it happens, and you wrote it straight, effectively. Sometimes I think that starting in the 80s, people became more and more desensitized and it saddens me. We must remain shockable. This poem helps. Now, I need to find a funny! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/6/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thanks CayCay. When I saw the contest theme--Upside Down World--I thought of going with humor. Then I thought of the more serious side of what's going on, and it weighed more heavily. Thanks so much for your comment. Janice

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