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What If It Be

lightning flicks…what? now? dark windows illuminate how pretty stained glass the church in red and blue veins what if it be the rapture? 2/17/2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2022 5:54:00 AM

It might be one of these days; in a delicate way you have said much here.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 6:15:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/19/2022 8:50:00 PM

Tantalizing... mesmerizing. ~ gw (and an added thanks for motivating me to look up what 'the rapture' is. I really had no idea). Kudos, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2022 8:02:00 AM

Kim, Your method of thinking is admirable to me. It's a lovely notion, too!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto!

Lynn D.

Date: 2/19/2022 7:54:00 AM

Good start. I liked it. You might want to expand and add more to it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thanj you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/19/2022 1:12:00 AM

Don't jump to conclusions. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:13:00 AM

Just meant to let people think. :)

Anil Deo

Date: 2/18/2022 8:37:00 PM

Weather, Nature intimates heavenly missives. Nice Kim. Shalom shalom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:13:00 AM

Truly! Shalom, sweet friend!

Valsa George

Date: 2/18/2022 6:42:00 PM

This is lovely.... Kim ! I visualize the scene.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/18/2022 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful, like you!! Pangie.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 7:39:00 PM

You are sweet! Thank you, Pangie!

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/18/2022 2:35:00 PM

Kim, I like the way you think. Rapture!! That will be a beautiful day. Thanks for making my evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 7:38:00 PM

Thank you, Debra!

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/18/2022 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful thought! Also, if Heaven came down to earth, would it be much different? Heaven everywhere God is. Lovely write. Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!