What If It Be

lightning flicks…what? now? dark windows illuminate how pretty stained glass the church in red and blue veins what if it be the rapture? 2/17/2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 5:54 AM
It might be one of these days; in a delicate way you have said much here.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:50 PM
Tantalizing... mesmerizing. ~ gw (and an added thanks for motivating me to look up what 'the rapture' is. I really had no idea). Kudos, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Poet Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Kim, Your method of thinking is admirable to me. It's a lovely notion, too!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Sotto!
D. Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Good start. I liked it. You might want to expand and add more to it.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Thanj you.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 1:12 AM
Don't jump to conclusions. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Just meant to let people think. :)
Deo Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 8:37 PM
Weather, Nature intimates heavenly missives. Nice Kim. Shalom shalom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Truly! Shalom, sweet friend!
George Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 6:42 PM
This is lovely.... Kim ! I visualize the scene.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Romios Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 6:05 PM
Beautiful, like you!! Pangie.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 7:39 PM
You are sweet! Thank you, Pangie!
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Kim, I like the way you think. Rapture!! That will be a beautiful day. Thanks for making my evening. Blessings ~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Thank you, Debra!
DiMino Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Beautiful thought! Also, if Heaven came down to earth, would it be much different? Heaven everywhere God is. Lovely write. Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Joe!
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