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What I Want

I want to hear sweet nothings give silent feelings a voice. And I want you to love me, show me that you're here by choice. I want us to survive storms, strengthened by our tears and pain. And I want what we once had, sharing our feelings again. I want to be thoroughly intertwined, body and soul. And I want to skip the past, for the future is our goal. I want memories, not dreams, on our list of things to do. And I want to feel alive; but most of all, I want you. (Quatrain) 1/22/2015

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Date: 6/22/2021 4:58:00 AM
Wow! That’s really beautiful:) soo raw and honest... sweet and real... special:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/22/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Melody, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/25/2018 8:11:00 PM
Lovely, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend. Emile.
Date: 1/28/2015 4:49:00 AM
"I want memories not dreams", a beautiful write Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/28/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Peter, I appreciate your taking the time to read my work. Emile.
Date: 1/22/2015 7:17:00 PM
very expressing touching poem, good work Emile, keep it up :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2015 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Mohamed, your comments are welcome. Emile.
Date: 1/22/2015 10:42:00 AM
Four stanza's of desire.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Albert, for your kind words. Emile
Date: 1/22/2015 10:37:00 AM
In search of true love... another one of your beautiful poems... love, nad
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2015 10:45:00 AM
Once again I'm in your debt Nadiya, thank you. Emile.
Date: 1/22/2015 9:20:00 AM
Touchy write full of feelings, Emile
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thank very much for your support. Emile.
Date: 1/22/2015 7:54:00 AM
Emile, another beautiful write, "A soul mate and Memories is what I want" . Blessings eve 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2015 9:06:00 AM
May your wishes be granted, thanks. Emile.
Date: 1/22/2015 7:49:00 AM
Emile, how utterly and truly beautiful, what I want is a man just "like you" so well worded, awesome writing and thank you for visiting my poem Death Whispers, I appreciated that so much ~~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2015 9:07:00 AM
You flatter me with your praise, thank you. Emile.

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