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What I Sense From You Part 2

We dated for three years Our bond of love grew Our relationship grown We got to know each other Our interests the same Now we have mutual friends Our family have met They get along nicely Your father is wonderful Like a dad I never had Your mother is easy to speak to I feel comfortable here Your cat and mine will get along This is a good sign for me I feel peaceful inside I sense something will occur Yet-I'm not sure what it is I sense something in the air Yet I am not sure-what it is You take me out to dine Somewhere very special One bottle of wine set You pour each glass Then get down on one knee Propose to me I am teary eye The i say yes

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 7/23/2019 6:07:00 PM

Had to come bad and visit this "sweet tender-glorious piece.... Write on James

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2019 8:19:00 AM

Hello James Edward Lee Sr. oh..thank you so much my friend. It came to me in a dream, then I wrote it. Have a nice day my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2019 1:30:00 PM

Hi Darlene, What a sweet love story. I felt like you took your reader on a journey. We were with you step by step leading up to that magical moment when the character in your story got down on one knee. She said Yes. I love happy endings. Is this a true story? I enjoyed the read my friend. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2019 8:15:00 PM

Hello Alexis, no I made up this poem, the idea came to me in a dream, so I wrote about it.I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 7/7/2019 4:22:00 PM

In all sincerity God granted unions... beautiful is the gift of a man sincere proposal to unite with the ONE and ONLY A gift from God, an honor to be honored. Marriage is only right and complete when you have God in it. Beautiful verse... May the future bring you a 2nd blessing..James

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2019 5:26:00 PM

Hello James Edward Lee Sr., yes it is the beauty of the proposal coming from the man a woman love's.Yes marriage is only right.and complete I hope towhen you have it with God. Thank you James I hope i get a second blessing. .. Darlene

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/7/2019 4:41:00 AM

This is how simple it should be, but rarely ever is. Beautiful. x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2019 12:43:00 PM

Hello Lady Labyrinth, I do agree with you. It takes time to find the right person to wed. X Have a nice dy my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2019 6:56:00 PM

Ahh!! I wish you the best that married life can give. God bless the union. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2019 12:46:00 PM

Hello Sara Kendrick,Thank you, I have not met him yet. When i do it would be my 2nd marriage. Thank you for the lovely comment. your welcome. have a nice day my friend.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/4/2019 7:59:00 PM

I appreciate your nice comments on my poem and I feel the love in this poem of your's. Very nice. Love, Joyce

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2019 12:51:00 PM

Hello Joyce Johnson,I do enjoy your poems. Thank you for the lovely comment. Love Darlene

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2019 7:19:00 AM

The last line, 'the' or 'then'? This was cute from start to finish, a romantic frolic to a big ole honkin' YES! All the best ... CayCay

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2019 11:53:00 AM

Hello Cay-Cay,Thank you for the lovely comment. I needed to write a second part to this poem.I am glad that I did. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/1/2019 3:01:00 PM

This is one of your best, again!! I can picture the scene. Good going on this Panagiota

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2019 11:56:00 AM

Hello Panagiota Romios I had to write a second part to this poem, and i am glad that I did. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/28/2019 3:48:00 PM

Yes Darlene... I imagined you there in your poem...Nice build up and message too...Enjoyed it...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2019 11:33:00 AM

Hello Micheal Arturo, as i wrote this poem I did see myself there. Yes the message to . It was a fun write.Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.