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What Follows Winter

The leaves are sleeping, motionless at dawn Waiting for a breeze to whisper life into them Lifting, parting soft shadows on stray sunbeams Waiting for the sun to turn fierce and pull fragrance from them Leaves trust in nature sustaining themselves They lavish, they fall they become soil When roots have drunk well the foliage cannot resist telling O to be as leaves To have faith in such cycles as these To not forget what follows Winter. ALL YOURS (May 5) Contest Judged: 5/5/2021 10:13:00 PM Sponsored by: Brian Strand | First Place

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Date: 5/28/2021 8:20:00 PM
Words of wisdom ~ beautiful
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Date: 5/6/2021 3:50:00 PM
Suzanne, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this lovely poem! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/17/2019 8:49:00 AM
I normally do not care much for free verse, but you have such a skill with words, images and sentiments that you might convert me. I am very glad to have come across your poems, Suzanne
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Date: 3/11/2019 1:42:00 PM
I am so encouraged by the positive comments on my poem. I appreciate you ALL. I hope to reply individually soon and repay with more reading and comments. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/11/2019 9:02:00 AM
Nice line: Waiting for the sun to turn fierce and pull fragrance from them
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Date: 3/11/2019 4:32:00 AM
Suz, this is so beautifully penned and very soothing too , well done ~
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Date: 3/11/2019 4:18:00 AM
Beautifully written, Suz. So well you told the life cycle of a leaf and with that reminded us that spring is coming. Lovely write. BTW, thank you so much for your visit. So much appreciate it...Charlie :)
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:17:00 PM
This is lovely, SuZanne! Janice
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Date: 3/10/2019 2:43:00 PM
Your love for nature and life itself is reflected through these words of yours, Suzanne. The whole poem is a delight to read, especially the end stanza. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/10/2019 10:55:00 AM
Suz, enjoyed the slow, undulating flow of your poem...how magical in its subtlety, ohhh!...huggs
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Date: 3/10/2019 8:02:00 AM
I love your poem, Suzanne. A FAV for me. Popped it on my list.
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:51:00 AM
A natural mystic...an order...A lovely write...
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:39:00 AM
Looking forward to what follows winter..the leaves you describe are slowly emerging..your words evoke their arrival..well done, SuZ.
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:31:00 AM
Great imagery in your poem Suzanne.. Sure feels like winter here at the moment..
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