Notes About The Poem

What Dreams Are Made Of

A simple scene a nestling seeks the comfort of the night
to lay enthralled, engrossed,  in memories of past days,
the nectar drawn from rivulets that run past blackened lash.

A lidded eye roves left, then right, as if it’s been betrayed
a corner tick, a slight knee twitch, odd choices now made.
The blanket once a comforter now twists so very tight.

A falling dream, a horrid scream, yet no land's in sight.
Bloodless body, writhe, heave, callout, nobody's home
your casing calls, umbilicus, umbilicus, reel me down.

A flying lift of breeze ‘neath hips, a lofting, oh so, high, 
brings soul to ground with sighing sound within the dream,
entranced, aroused, the coming light, the end of night, wake.



First Published in Sweet Dreams and Night Terrors 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:20 AM
You have a unique way of expressing yourself, I enjoy it.
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Enjoyed reading your dreamy thoughts..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Nunez Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 2:33 AM
You have mastered subtle suggestions, Deb. I am being enriched just by reading your writes.
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:12 PM
very interesting how you portrayed dreams. The many types of them, Debs.I love dreams . Now that I am rather sleep deprived, they are even more precious to me.
La France Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Debbie, I love this poem full of beautiful words to accompany that amazing picture, so well written, a perfect 7 . . .
Peranteau Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Such the poetic picture of the dream dear poet . I really enjoyed this Debbie....Have a wonderful week......much love, james
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:57 PM
You have Wowed me again, Debbie...a fave!
Merryman Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Debbie, this is simply amazing! The images you have portrayed are so vivid, powerful. Love, Kim
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:46 PM
OMG Deb! No one can draw me into the moment like you can! Superlative splendor entrances! A winner for me and a fav! 7+
Guzzi Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:05 PM
Thanks so much Connie your encouragement means the world to me.
Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 5:32 PM
This very night I'll close my eyes having read your words to dream. Maybe I'll share what I have dreamt, after I've allowed my thoughts to stream. Love this one Debbie, yep, it's wonderful poetry, James :) :)
Guzzi Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:06 PM
I'm in trouble if you can astral project too!
Hunjeri Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Wow, I enjoyed this. The imagery and depth of your words captured the dream so well. #7
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