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What Does the Glass Reveal

While searching for my younger self one day (The present one was getting hard to bear), I rambled through the boxes of my youth to waken recollections buried there. In my warm attic with my Polaroids, I saw the dauntless smile of years ago. I stood before a mirror, posed, and smiled. The glass tossed back the face I'd come to know. It really wasn’t wrinkles on my face or graying hair that made me look away. My smile had changed from bright and genuine to faded. Humbled, I began to pray about my negativity, which showed in my lackluster smile. God heard my prayer, reminding me that glass reflections change, revealing joy but also showing wear brought on by age. I’m glad for moments spent with photos of a time that seemed sublime. I’m thankful I can smile most days because of inner peace and changes wrought by time. Date: September 28, 2017 Contest: Premiere Contest Number 100 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 9/30/2017 8:47:00 PM
Janice, a hearty congratulations on your lovely poem. Many of us can relate to your words of wisdom. ~ Sonia
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/30/2017 9:22:00 PM
Sonia, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 9/30/2017 8:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janice. There is so much truth in your poem, Janice. I love your conclusion. Here's to smiles!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/30/2017 9:23:00 PM
Agnes, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 9/26/2017 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on an awesome poem I think many of us can relate to Janice!~Che :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/26/2017 11:48:00 AM
Cheryl, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 9/26/2017 8:53:00 AM
Back to bestow congratulations :) and a lovely day to you! xomo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/26/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Janice
Date: 9/24/2017 8:55:00 PM
Nice reflective piece(pun intended) Janice I wrote something similar to this, I guess it's common to look back at our youth wistfully, really a quality write Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2017 10:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, John! Janice
Date: 9/24/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thank you for reminding me what the priorities are, Janice - I sometimes get lost. What a wonderful write, full of wisdom and beauty! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg. You are very kind! Janice
Date: 9/24/2017 4:51:00 PM
Janice, congratulations on your win in the contest, I really like this poem so much!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2017 5:18:00 PM
THANK YOU, Constance! Janice
Date: 9/22/2017 3:05:00 PM
Wonderful pen Janice, engaging and enjoyed, a beautiful story, best of luck to you in the contest xomo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Janice
Date: 9/21/2017 11:07:00 PM
A lovely poem, Janice ... Expression of feeling in pictures is so delightful ... the last stanza is both beautiful and inspiring ...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2017 6:54:00 AM
Probir, thank you so much. You are very encouraging! Janice
Date: 9/21/2017 7:57:00 PM
Lovely reflection on younger past--I remember the Polaroid pictures--so long ago that was it seems-best wishes Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice

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